due South fic: Shake Trip and Fall

Feb 17, 2005 18:32

Title: Shake Trip and Fall
Author: Pearl-o
LJ name: pearl_oFandom: due South ( Read more... )

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tobyfan February 18 2005, 03:06:48 UTC
*thud*

Oh my goodness.

This one just really hit me in the gut. Wow. So incredibly hot and man oh man do I love your Ray voice. Perfection.

Um, I need to read this again. Right now.

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pearl_o February 21 2005, 19:15:02 UTC
Thank you so much!

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mergatrude February 18 2005, 03:21:01 UTC
Oh. *fans self* This is good and hot and just a touch strange, and they're a little fucked up, but not in a bad way. I liked this very much:

Fraser liked all of that, but he never said a damn word. Ray'd had to figure it out all on his own, the same way he figured out anything about Fraser that was worth knowing.

Fraser can talk the hind legs off a caribou, but not about what he wants or needs.

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pearl_o February 21 2005, 19:15:36 UTC
This is good and hot and just a touch strange, and they're a little fucked up, but not in a bad way.

Okay, so that's the best description ever. *g* Thanks!

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serialkarma February 18 2005, 03:24:15 UTC
Mmmm, porn! Sweet, too!

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pearl_o February 21 2005, 19:15:43 UTC
Porn, yay!

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shayheyred February 18 2005, 03:26:50 UTC
Thudalicious.

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pearl_o February 21 2005, 19:15:55 UTC
Hee. Thanks, shay!

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brooklinegirl February 18 2005, 03:42:44 UTC
You did the one I said! I love you! THIS MUCH! *smooches you delightedly* And yay, omg, buzzed Ray is my FAVORITE, deep deep favorite! THIs was a great great thing after a bad bad day! Dude, SO many great lines:

because the other gospel truth about the equation of Ray plus alcohol involved horniness

*nodsnodsnods* I'm v. happy about that. And Ray's wet from the rain, and it's not their first time, though it seems like it, 'cause you know what? Fraser, he makes things difficult, yes, he does, but that so WORKS here, I LOVE it here, and I love love LOVE this:

that was one of the first things he figured out, having sex with Fraser: Fraser liked it to hurt a little

Yeah. He would, wouldn't he? That made me go nrrrrgh and THIS:

Ray'd had to figure it out all on his own, the same way he figured out anything about Fraser that was worth knowing.

made me go *heart*, because Ray fucking CARES enough to figure it out on his own. All of it. And I love Ray flirting just to piss Fraser off, and I love this line so, so much:

"That was great. ( ... )

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pearl_o February 21 2005, 19:19:34 UTC
Dude, you write the kind of feedback that I kind of just want to clutch close to me and roll around in. And that metaphor is not quite what I meant to say, but the gist is still clear, I think, which is: YAAAAAY.

And Fraser leaves, but that's okay, mostly because this line just made me SO. DAMN. HAPPY:

Ahahahaha. That is actually one of the lines that I, personally, find really funny? So it makes me giggle a lot that you mention it.

And the irritating man thing -- man, it's really amazing with Ray and Fraser how many different things are really endearments at heart, you know? They can be freaks and assholes and irritating and frustrating, and it's all part of the love. Yes.

*snug* Thank you so much!

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