Gift of Screws, Chapter Sixteen

[lieueitak]

Title: Gift of Screws, Chapter Sixteen
Author: Duckie Nicks
Rating:  NC-17 for sex
Characters:  House, Cuddy, Rachel Cuddy
Author's Note:  This piece takes place in the future when Rachel is five; House and Cuddy are in an established relationship.
Warning:  This fic also

Comments

[crumpled_up]

Oh no. Oh man. Now we now why Cuddy's been gone so long. ;aslkdfjas;ldkfjal;sdkfjal;skdjfal;skdfj WAY TO BRING ON THE DRAMA AND KILL ME. Okay, we haven't even reached maximum angst yet, but just the anticipation is killing me.

John is a prick. Ugh. How disgusting. And I love how Cuddy firmly tells him that he has zero chance of being with her. I bet better men than John have tried prying her away from House and failed every time. I was disgusted with John's actions and reasonings. I can't imagine how Cuddy must've felt. Kudos to making that horrifying. Cue the guilt that'll eat her up. I can't wait for this angst even though I have a feeling it'll break my heart, but I know you'll do House and Cuddy justice. Can I just tell you though, that when Cuddy kept dismissing John and told him she'll always take his money I cheered so hard for her? I wish she slapped him, but her harsh words were just so good.

Now I'm even more excited for the next chapter. I love this fic to pieces. Seriously, so much ♥ for you and this fic.

[lieueitak]

Sorry for killing you! XD And the worst is still yet to come, lol. Make sure you have your defibrillators with you for the rest of the fic. ;)

Good to see you're not a big fan of John. To be honest, I'm sure Cuddy would have slapped him if she'd anticipated his behavior. But she was too surprised to really know what to do/say. Oh well. I'm sure House is willing to pinch hit for her. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[tomcess18]

I was dumbfounded. In a good way. That's how awesome this chapter is. I loved Cuddy's speech on why she's with House. Powerful enough to convinced John that she's only interested in his money and yet he doesn't believed her, what a moron!

I love this chapter. I crave for your next update!

[lieueitak]

Thank you. Part of me feels bad for John. Rationally I'm sure he realizes he doesn't have a chance, but he loves her (or at least thinks he does), so that's a little hard to accept. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. :D

[julessunshine82]

WOW. That was an amazing chapter. I loved every word--loved how Cuddy defended her relationship with House.

I also loved how you fleshed out John. What an interesting addition to this story, even though he's pure creep.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

[lieueitak]

Thanks. :D I'm glad you liked it. John is a little bit of creep for sure. It's nice to hear that you liked his addition anyway. Thanks for letting me know!

[fullmoondream]

Once again my friend, you have blown my mind. I ALWAYS look forward to your updates. This story is by far one of my top 3 favorite stories. I adore your writing. You have a true gift, and I truly hope that you continue to bless us with it.

[lieueitak]

Thank you. :) I really try to write something people will enjoy, so it's so nice to hear that you look forward to updates and like GoS that much. Thanks :)

[jwhite2199]

WOW.

Absolutely fantastic. I definitely expected some kind of a move from John, but I didn't expect that reaction from Cuddy. Her taking the time to defend her relationship with House, and to give John those answers... I wasn't expecting that. Not that I don't think she'd stick up for House every chance she could, but I didn't expect Cuddy to dignify John's accusations with a response. I'm glad she did; I think it showed her devotion and love for House completely, and also (despite the harsh ending,) showed that she really didn't have any true intention of leading John on. That she sat and calmly explained her feelings, that she felt she owed John those answers, puts her POV out there very clearly.

I can't even imagine what House's reaction will be, but I can't wait to find out!

[lieueitak]

Thank you! :D It's nice to hear that you enjoyed the chapter. XD As far as how House will react... well, you'll have to wait and see! :P Thanks for reading and reviewing.