Gift of Screws, Chapter Seven

May 15, 2010 20:19

Title: Gift of Screws, Chapter Seven
Author: Duckie Nicks
Rating:  NC-17 for sex
Characters:  House, Cuddy, Rachel Cuddy
Author's Note:  This piece takes place in the future when Rachel is five; House and Cuddy are in an established relationship. This fic also contains sex. If any of those things bother you, please hit your back ( Read more... )

(character) rachel cuddy, (character) greg house, (chaptered fic) gift of screws, (author) quack, (ship) house/cuddy, (fandom) house, (character) lisa cuddy

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dlb42694 May 16 2010, 05:08:59 UTC
omg! thats all i can say

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lieueitak May 17 2010, 04:57:42 UTC
I think that's kind of what House, Cuddy, and Rachel are saying at this moment too. :P

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crumpled_up May 16 2010, 06:20:28 UTC
my facial reactions throughout this chapter: ^_^ --> O_o

I was literally LOL'ing IRL at the beginning with the pointless fights and the proposal and the sheer genius of Cuddy and House's terrible way of digging himself out of the hole he dug. The sex was hot as always because guh, you somehow write the hottest scenes ever. And then I had to stuff my fist in my mouth from screaming 'OHMIGODWTFBBQ!' at the end. Oh man. Perfect timing there or not really. I'm not sure. Wow. Um. Yeah.

I can't wait to see how the next chapter will go down. That'll be... interesting to say the least. ;)

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lieueitak May 17 2010, 05:01:20 UTC
Thank you. I think I was pushing with this sex scene, and some have responded to it less than positively, so I appreciate you saying that it was hot. That's always the goal. :)

But yeah, Rachel totally had to go and ruin their fun time. If you're going to have a sex marathon, you gotta expect that your kid will interrupt at some point. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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tomcess18 May 16 2010, 06:54:42 UTC
oh no, poor rachel! i wonder how they will going to explain this to her. i can picture house making a joke about what happen..

on the other hand, i like the way you write about their fighting it is so real and sometimes childish, but behind those childish comment, there is logic and metaphor hiding beneath them, so that was excellent! i always read some of the comments that they want more talk and less sex, but i think that their fighting and sex (no matter how sick house's fantasies are) is so them and probably the components of their relationship. so kudos to your title, it has leave up it's meaning!

i missed chapter 6 here so i read it on fanfiction.net congrats, you have a lot of readers there!

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lieueitak May 17 2010, 05:05:07 UTC
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

House may or may not make a joke. Remember, his penis is still in Cuddy's mouth, and she's just had the crap scared out of her. Things might not be so funny depending on how that ends. ;)

By the way, I'm also glad to hear that you're enjoying the mix of fighting and sex. It seems to me that they would always be better at expressing their affection for one another in this singular way and expressing their anger at one another in a much more verbal way. So I'm glad you're liking the mix. Thanks!

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iownmyworld May 16 2010, 10:33:21 UTC
Oh, I was really revived from my sleepy state when I saw an update! Yay!

Thumbs up for you! :)
Like the others, I like the senseless fight before they have sex. Very them. I just don't see the House I know from the show and from what I have in mind in this chappy. He was direct to the point of what he want when it comes to sex. It's like reading a very Class A porno. Hehehe. :)

Dun, dun, dun, dun for the last part! Can't wait for the next update! :D

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lieueitak May 17 2010, 05:19:09 UTC
Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked the fight.

As far as the sex... for me as the author, I usually feel that what translates as being "House" and "Cuddy" in sex scenes is the way they talk to one another. In this chapter though, Cuddy doesn't do much talking during the sex, and House is largely living out a fantasy of his; he's literally doing something he wouldn't do on any given day, lol. So I guess I was going for a scene that would describe their relationship without that much dialogue: he's found an idea or theory that he wants to explore pretty intensely and Cuddy facilitates that. Perhaps that didn't come through...

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the feedback. :)

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alex_kingston May 16 2010, 15:31:35 UTC
Oooh wow this chapter is pure and utter love because of the chunks of conversation between House and Cuddy and also how House came to the conclusion that Cuddy must truly love him. That was brilliant characterization and delving into their psyches.

And hee what a way to end! Talk about cliffhanger! And what a sight it must be for Rachel. Lol!

Also, I don't think I've talked about this before but I really love how you write sexual scenes. Its so seamless and devoid of anything corny or overly romanticized. But at the same time you get how they feel for each other. This chapter especially, you make a blowjob hot and rather beautiful at the same time. ♥♥♥

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lieueitak May 17 2010, 05:23:22 UTC
Thank you! :) I really do try to get the characterization into every nook and cranny, so I'm glad that it rang true for you. Especially since the sex scene has gotten mixed reviews, I appreciate hearing that you enjoyed it and got the sense that they did really care for each other. That means a lot.

And yes, Rachel got quite the sight. *is jealous* ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :D

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