Title: Gift of Screws, Chapter Seven
Author: Duckie Nicks
Rating: NC-17 for sex
Characters: House, Cuddy, Rachel Cuddy
Author's Note: This piece takes place in the future when Rachel is five; House and Cuddy are in an established relationship. This fic also contains sex. If any of those things bother you, please hit your back
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I was literally LOL'ing IRL at the beginning with the pointless fights and the proposal and the sheer genius of Cuddy and House's terrible way of digging himself out of the hole he dug. The sex was hot as always because guh, you somehow write the hottest scenes ever. And then I had to stuff my fist in my mouth from screaming 'OHMIGODWTFBBQ!' at the end. Oh man. Perfect timing there or not really. I'm not sure. Wow. Um. Yeah.
I can't wait to see how the next chapter will go down. That'll be... interesting to say the least. ;)
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But yeah, Rachel totally had to go and ruin their fun time. If you're going to have a sex marathon, you gotta expect that your kid will interrupt at some point. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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on the other hand, i like the way you write about their fighting it is so real and sometimes childish, but behind those childish comment, there is logic and metaphor hiding beneath them, so that was excellent! i always read some of the comments that they want more talk and less sex, but i think that their fighting and sex (no matter how sick house's fantasies are) is so them and probably the components of their relationship. so kudos to your title, it has leave up it's meaning!
i missed chapter 6 here so i read it on fanfiction.net congrats, you have a lot of readers there!
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House may or may not make a joke. Remember, his penis is still in Cuddy's mouth, and she's just had the crap scared out of her. Things might not be so funny depending on how that ends. ;)
By the way, I'm also glad to hear that you're enjoying the mix of fighting and sex. It seems to me that they would always be better at expressing their affection for one another in this singular way and expressing their anger at one another in a much more verbal way. So I'm glad you're liking the mix. Thanks!
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Thumbs up for you! :)
Like the others, I like the senseless fight before they have sex. Very them. I just don't see the House I know from the show and from what I have in mind in this chappy. He was direct to the point of what he want when it comes to sex. It's like reading a very Class A porno. Hehehe. :)
Dun, dun, dun, dun for the last part! Can't wait for the next update! :D
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As far as the sex... for me as the author, I usually feel that what translates as being "House" and "Cuddy" in sex scenes is the way they talk to one another. In this chapter though, Cuddy doesn't do much talking during the sex, and House is largely living out a fantasy of his; he's literally doing something he wouldn't do on any given day, lol. So I guess I was going for a scene that would describe their relationship without that much dialogue: he's found an idea or theory that he wants to explore pretty intensely and Cuddy facilitates that. Perhaps that didn't come through...
Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the feedback. :)
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And hee what a way to end! Talk about cliffhanger! And what a sight it must be for Rachel. Lol!
Also, I don't think I've talked about this before but I really love how you write sexual scenes. Its so seamless and devoid of anything corny or overly romanticized. But at the same time you get how they feel for each other. This chapter especially, you make a blowjob hot and rather beautiful at the same time. ♥♥♥
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And yes, Rachel got quite the sight. *is jealous* ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :D
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