(Put Me Back Together) Late Arrivals (4/?)

[keeper_of_stars]

Title: Put Me Back Together
Part: Chapter 4: Late Arrivals
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kurt/Puck, Burt Hummel, Mercedes Jones, Finn Hudson, Quinn Fabray, Emma Pillsbury, Will Schuester, Tina Cohen-Chang, Artie Abrams, Rachel Berry, Santana Lopez, Brittany, Mike Chang, Matt Rutherford
Author’s Note: The title and

Comments

[held_a_rose]

Aww! Kurt forgetting about Artie was a nice touch and felt very believable to me. And I like how you used Kurt's apology to bring him close to Puck! Very clever.

This little interacting between Kurt and Puck was lovely. I love how sweet and innocent Kurt is.

Great chapter!

[keeper_of_stars]

Aww, thank you. I'm glad you liked that. I hadn't originally planned to include that, but I'm really glad I did. It helped to round out the story. Plus, like you said, it totally allowed me to bring Puck and Kurt closer together. (So, win/win, no?) :D

HEHE, Kurt really is quite innocent. Which, I feel like people seem to forget. So I'm really trying to keep that in mind.

Thanks again! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[klaudix_kiddo]

ooohhh hohoho...I loved the Puck-holding-Kurt's-wrist-under-the-jacket scene!
Puck ,you dog! lol

More party!!! yay!

[keeper_of_stars]

LOL, thank you! I'm glad you liked that little bit. :P

[lezi]

Oh my...

I had to reread the scene with the not-really-but-kind-of hand-holding. It was very intense, for some reason. Very emotional and charged.

I also felt for Artie, and I was beside Kurt in mortification. I have moments when I forget a friend's needs, and it always makes me feel horrid. But I don't mean to, and Kurt didn't mean to, so...

Anyway. You're brilliant, and I can't wait for more!

[keeper_of_stars]

Wow. I really can't tell you how very touching your review is. Thank you so much.

I'm SO glad that you found the not-really-hand-holding moment intense and emotionally charged. That's totally what I was going for. I wanted it to carry a lot of weight and have a huge impact. And to know that I accomplished that goal makes me very happy.

I hate when I forget about my friend's needs. I mean, I know how angry/upset I get when people forget that I don't eat meat (and then serve only non-vegetarian friendly foods). So I can just imagine how upsetting something like that must be.

Thank you again. So, so much. *hugs*

[lovelycudy]

This is so, so, so good. Perfect proof that there are amazingly talented writers here. God. You have no idea how much I love this. It's not only well written, but powerful, honest and IC.

Pure love.

I hope you update soon.

[keeper_of_stars]

Wow. Just... wow. I honestly don't know what to say. Thank you so very much. I'm so happy that you're enjoying this and that you find my work worthy of such praise. It means a lot to me.

Thank you again. *hugs*

I'll be updating soon-ish. Hopefully next week, but maybe not. It's all going to come down to betaing, editing and time constraints. Wish me luck.

[kirke_novak]

There is something about this fic, I can't describe it, it seems so real. I literally see everything you write, the flow of this fic is amazing.

Many bonus points for the entire scene with Artie - very genuine.

And didn't the last paragraph make me forget to breath! I think Kurt can't deny now that Puck was kissing him, not Quinn.

[keeper_of_stars]

I... I don't know how to respond to such an amazing review! I... Thank you. I'm so glad that this feels real becuase I try so hard to keep everything believeable and true. And it pleases me to know end that you can see the images. I love to paint pictures with the words and to know that you can see them makes me very happy.

Thank you for the bonus points for Artie. I hadn't originally planned to include that, but I'm so glad I did. In the end, it just felt right.

Now, normally I'm a fan of breahting, but in this case, I'm all for the not breathing. :P But that's all I'll say on that...