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(Put Me Back Together) Kiss Me Goodbye (1/?)

Jan 21, 2010 13:59

Title: Put Me Back Together
Part: Chapter 1: Kiss Me Goodbye
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kurt/Puck, Burt Hummel, Mercedes Jones, Finn Hudson, Quinn Fabray, Emma Pillsbury, Will Schuester, Tina Cohen-Chang, Artie Abrams, Rachel Berry, Santana Lopez, Brittany, Mike Chang, Matt Rutherford
Author’s Note: The title and ( Read more... )

(character) will schuester, (character) rachel berry, (character) artie abrams, (character) santana lopez, (chaptered fic) put me back together, (fandom) glee, (ship) kurt/puck, (character) matt rutherford, (character) finn hudson, (character) kurt hummel, (character) noah "puck" puckerman, (character) mike chang, (author) squeeka, (character) quinn fabray, (character) emma pillsbury, (character) brittany s. pierce, (character) mercedes jones, (character) burt hummel, (character) tina cohen-chang

Comments 56

deviant_dev January 21 2010, 20:37:32 UTC

I really like this. Your Kurt is very believable, and I'm curious to see where you take this.

keeper_of_stars January 21 2010, 20:44:44 UTC

Oh, thank you! I really appreciate that. I try really hard to keep everything ic. :D

Also, this is random, but you're the very first commentor on this story. Ever. I'm including ff.net in that. So... yay!

deviant_dev January 21 2010, 20:56:07 UTC

Wow! I'm NEVER first! lol. I feel special now, lol.

keeper_of_stars January 21 2010, 20:59:18 UTC

LOL, well you get to be first this time! *showers you with duck shaped confettii* I'm really excited about it myself. I couldn't wait to see who the very first reviewer was going to be. :P

abluegirl January 21 2010, 20:47:28 UTC

I LOVE THIS BEGINNING. Love, love, love. There is so much tension between Kurt and his unseen suitor. Seriously. LOVE.

keeper_of_stars January 21 2010, 20:48:58 UTC

Awwwww, yay! I was going for tension, but I never felt like I quite got there, lol. So it makes me really happy to know you think I did! :D Thanks again.

boysinperil January 21 2010, 21:01:33 UTC

Oooh, so much potential!

keeper_of_stars January 21 2010, 21:02:51 UTC

Yay! Thank you! :D

minishimi January 21 2010, 21:05:07 UTC

L.O.V.E

Such a situation that I love to keep reading about.

Kurt just sounds so distressed, but he is so calm about it...it's really sad. And I ADORE Burt! OMG BEST SUPPORTIVE FATHER EVAR.

I am anticipating more.

=^.^=

keeper_of_stars January 21 2010, 21:10:51 UTC

YAY! Thank you!

Poor, Kurt. Yes, he's definitley distressed, lol. And Burt. Oh how I love him. He's just... wonderful. He's a joy to write.

Yup, there will be more! :D

Thanks again! :D

eyesarmslove January 21 2010, 21:21:51 UTC

This is so beautiful. I love, love, love it. Often in fanfic, the details are lost upon us, so I really adore how detailed the kiss and Kurt's feeligs/sensations in response was.

Thanks so much for writing and sharing!

keeper_of_stars January 21 2010, 22:23:57 UTC

Awwww, yay! I really appreciate that. I'm a very detailed oriented person in general so I have tons of fun working in little things. I'm glad you liked those extra touches. :)

Thank you muchly!

P.S. Your icon is really pretty!