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One Shot Fic: Long Time Coming

Jan 13, 2009 15:08

Title: Long Time Coming
Author: Squeeka Cuomo
Rating: PG
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Chloe/Davis
Notes: This is dedicated to lust_4sorrow, whose beautiful Chloe/Davis fics inspired me to write my own.
- This is an extended version of the kiss from “Abyss”.
Warning: N/A
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: There was nothing spontaneous about the kiss.

( Long Time Coming )

(ship) chloe/davis, (fandom) smallville, (character) chloe sullivan, (other) gift fic, (author) squeeka, (character) davis bloom

Comments 9

vagrantdream January 13 2009, 21:31:19 UTC

aww. Now why couldn't they have shown us that?

Thank you for the Chloe/Davis fix! :D

His fingers twisted through her short, blonde hair. Hers stayed balled up in his jacket, as if she were afraid to let him go. The moment, though harsh and unrelenting, was so fragile.
Loved this part!
I was clued into the fact that it was a dream/ fantasy by the way the kiss was.
All i can say is ty! ty! and thanks to lust4 sorrow for inspiring it!

keeper_of_stars January 14 2009, 22:51:45 UTC

I know, right! But then again, sometimes the tension is soooo much better than the actual kiss. :P

You're welcome! I've had this idea in mind for a LONG time. I've only just gotten to it. I guess it just wasn't time until now. And it's SO different from how I normally write. I'm so not a minimalist.

You guessed? Man. I tried to hide it! Ah, well. lol

But thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Her Chloe/Davis fics were the first I read, and they inspired this. So I had to dedicate it to her. Without her, I may not have thought to do this. :)

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keeper_of_stars January 14 2009, 22:53:17 UTC

Awww, you're welcome. I decided, a long time ago, that if I wrote a Chloe/Davis fic, I'd dedicate it to you. So, I'm really glad you liked it. :D

eternal_moonie January 14 2009, 12:30:57 UTC

I Love it!!! AWESOME!!

keeper_of_stars January 14 2009, 22:52:13 UTC

Yay! Thank you. :D

metallicargirl February 16 2009, 21:33:09 UTC

I love it!!! Could Chlavis be more wonderful, i think not. Good use of the Rob song. It really worked out.

keeper_of_stars February 16 2009, 22:54:30 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I thought the lyrics were just perfect for this/them. :D

metallicargirl February 16 2009, 23:51:35 UTC

I have the song on my ipod so I'll have to give it another listen.

keeper_of_stars February 19 2009, 18:08:03 UTC

I listened to it while I was writing the fic actually. :D