Edge of Chaos (2/15)

[lieueitak]

Title: Edge of Chaos, Chapter Two
Author: Duckie Nicks
Rating:  PG-13
Characters:  House, Cuddy, Wilson -- friendship between the three, maybe some Huddy if you squint...
Author's Note:  Spoilers for "Wilson's Heart."  Please note that chapter one is a flash forward, so there will be some elements that you'll need to read on in further chapters to

Comments

[bittereternity]

I *tried* to read it all together but I had to read it in 8 installments because Cuddy didn't come to Amber's funeral and Wilson's hurting so much and no one's there for him enough until I remembered that they aren't real. Oops.

Anyway, this is really well done. It makes me want to hug Wilson and never ever let go. I look forward to the next chapters =)

(And btw, I LOL'd when I saw the Heisenberg's principle..I can't remember how many times I've had to memorise and explain it)

[lieueitak]

Thanks for the review! :o) I like that you LOL'd at the Heisenberg's principle; just looking online for theories to shape each chapter has made me feel like I'm back in a science class, hehehe. So I'm glad to know I'm not the only one.

Wilson really could use some hugs right now. D:

Anyway, thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. :-)

[egeria61]

How did I not see this before? Just went back to read the first chapter, and now this one. It's great! And you're planning 15 chapters? *rubs hands together gleefully* I like it that you made House's eyes gray when he woke up, instead of their usual blue. :D

[lieueitak]

Thank you for the review! To be honest, I wish I had thought of the change in eye color myself. But really, I think that was more of a choice of whoever shot the scene in the hospital at the end of Wilson's Heart. After watching it and rewatching it for this fic, I noticed that everything, but particularly Hugh's bright blue eyes, seemed incredibly drab. So I included it, :o)

Thanks again for reviewing.

[bmax67]

Wow.
So beautifully written.
You have great insight into Cuddy. Her feelings during this whole fiasco towards not only House and Wilson but towards herself as well were spot on and very in character. Her thoughts about what she could have done to prevent this, should she had gotten help for House? Her devotion to him in his moment of need. Because, let's face it, House had nobody except Cuddy.
Loved all of your descriptions. I love a fic full of details and how you've painted a perfect picture.
Oh, and also loved how you filled in all of the little gaps throughout the episode.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be waiting patiently.

[lieueitak]

Such kind words! Thank you! I'm usually more of a minimalist when it comes to description and detail. And I was kind of worried that I was going overboard. But I'm extremely glad to hear that you really liked it. So thank you so much. :o)

[merlynnod]

This is incredible! The power of Cuddy's feelings and realizations are amazingly captured, and the conversation between House and Wilson in the apartment...owww...

Once again, such lovely work, very much looking forward to your next installment! :D

[lieueitak]

Thank you! I'm really glad you like what I've written so far. :o) Thanks again.

[brandy71]

This is fantastic! I love the way you got into Cuddy's head in such a believable way, and all the details really bring it to life. I'm looking forward to the next thirteen chapters!

[lieueitak]

Ooh, thanks for the kind words. :o) I really appreciate it.

(And BTW, I'm in love with your icon)