Following, Part Sixteen [Jack/Juliet] [R] [WIP]

[squeakyboots]

Title: Following (Part Sixteen)
Characters: Juliet, Jack, Charlotte, Daniel, Hurley, Bernard & Rose (so far)
Pairing: Juliet/Jack, hints of Charlotte/Daniel
Rating: R (This part is more like PG-13- maybe a little profanity.)
Spoilers: Season 4, Season 5 (sort of)
A/N:  I got inspired to write more--but now I have to get back to (my neglected) work

Comments

[squeakyboots]

Indeed. I can finally understand why people like to write Ben--he's a lot of fun to work with.

[nighttiming1022]

O. M. G. Ben!!! I'm so thrilled that you've added him into the mix. :D As I've told you, I love how you've put in Christian (because of how important he is to Jack's psyche), and I really believe Ben is majorly important to Juliet's, so I'm squeeing pretty hard right now :D

“Juliet,” he said, looking into the darkness that was still resolving itself into her shape. such a great description :)

And, I just love Jack at the end. I really felt his desperation come through.

This plot has me all excited :D I'll be patiently waiting for the next update!

[squeakyboots]

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying Ben; I hope he's coming across convincingly. And you'll definitely get more desperate!Jack before this section is through!

I believe the next part will be the really fun part that I've been going on about for ages...so I'm looking forward to it too. :)