Against the Current

[squagly2]

so here's a short song i just threw down on paper. ive had writer's block for a few months now and im trying to break it. take a look and let me know what you think...

*Finally found something worth fighting for
But it doesn’t seem to want to be rescued
I’m being washed aside now
Swimming against the current

Everything seems so impossible
Am I just being greedy?
Thinking of what the future holds
But I’m drawing a blank

Just take my hand one more time
To see if you really need me
Just gaze into my eyes one last time
To see if you really love me

Finally found something worth fighting for
But it doesn’t seem to want to be rescued
I’m being washed aside now
Swimming against the current

Your scent no longer lingers on my pillowcase
Your phone calls are becoming a rarity
I’m no longer sure of what I felt
I’m no longer sure of what you felt

Holding you close in my dreams
Waking to find my side empty
I look out my window at the sky
Remembering what love once was*

so...please leave some feedback to help me out, i can clearly use it.

much appreciated

peace all