Red Pen Edit - CH 14 ~the sexy chapter~
Proof I'm editing my balls off for you guys.
I have to admit my writing has a long way to go. Hopefully this will help. I have problems with creating the "surrounding scene". Dialog is definitely one of my strong points - letting you know what's in the room or what the characters are doing.....ummm I got some work to do there.
Also, I <3 putting songs with stories. I have two new ones to go with Nightminds -
The Flys - I got you where I want you
Sara McLaughlin - Posession
I can't wait to hear what songs you think of when you read the finished copy. ^..^
I have to admit my writing has a long way to go. Hopefully this will help. I have problems with creating the "surrounding scene". Dialog is definitely one of my strong points - letting you know what's in the room or what the characters are doing.....ummm I got some work to do there.
Also, I <3 putting songs with stories. I have two new ones to go with Nightminds -
The Flys - I got you where I want you
Sara McLaughlin - Posession
I can't wait to hear what songs you think of when you read the finished copy. ^..^