LJI:W3 Everything looks like a nail

Oct 14, 2019 15:44


I spent my childhood

in a binary world of zeros and ones

where the black and white rules

of targets and tools

distinguished the daughters from sons.

In my adulthood

I learned to count in other numbers

see the colors of context and phrase

and welcome the ways

individuality unencumbers.

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Edited on 2019/10/15 @ 2:05pm, before voting started ( Read more... )

lji: 11, lj idol

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adoptedwriter October 14 2019, 21:11:31 UTC
Beautiful!

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spydielives October 15 2019, 04:59:02 UTC
Thank you!

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karmasoup October 15 2019, 03:45:43 UTC
Simple, but elegant.

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spydielives October 15 2019, 04:59:12 UTC
Thank you!

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roina_arwen October 15 2019, 03:48:28 UTC
I really enjoyed this!

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spydielives October 15 2019, 04:59:25 UTC
*grin* Thank you!!

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tonithegreat October 15 2019, 04:24:54 UTC
Lovely and spare.

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spydielives October 15 2019, 04:59:37 UTC
Thank you!

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orockthro October 15 2019, 16:57:23 UTC
This was beautiful. It's short length really added to it. :)

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spydielives October 15 2019, 18:02:12 UTC
Thank you. I do not usually write really brief poems but in this case, there really didn't seem to be a need to add anything else.

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