[LJI9:04] Kana Tevoro

Apr 04, 2014 07:05

It’s been more than ten years since I last faced the intruder, the stranger, the alien being who watched me from a shadowed corner of my room as I silently screamed and invisibly struggled against the chains that held me immobile ( Read more... )

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eternal_ot April 4 2014, 11:32:15 UTC
Oh! I like the way you described it...interesting take..:)

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eska818 April 4 2014, 12:01:57 UTC
I love your take on the topic, and you have a way with story- telling. Very bright and colorful imagery despite the creepiness of the piece. Love it.

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adoptedwriter April 4 2014, 12:50:31 UTC
I love this! Sorry for your sleep troubles though, but nicely described. AW

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baxaphobia April 4 2014, 13:39:02 UTC
I can't imagine how terrifying this is! I'm glad at least you know what it is and don't let it paralyze you inother ways. Hugs my friend!

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muchtooarrogant April 4 2014, 16:27:50 UTC
I loved your description of the colors and music, it was an interesting mix with the monster's creepy shadows. Very nicely described and told.

Dan

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