This... is My Poem.
It has come to my attention that many people are writting poetry... for a while now. I have stuck my hand in songwritting for a few years now. I figure I might as well try this to be cool and different. Though we are all the same. And I call this creation:
"Revolution-Return"
by Michael "Boris" Catalano
So mournful
is the funeral
passing by
the poor man
who fought the ban
on our liberty
He was killed
and the grave filled
they said "put your head down on the choppin' block"
he replied "no,
because I know,
it is wrong to commit suicide. You must force me down"
They used force
Though his mind's a horse
his body is starved and feeble
He was killed that day
and must be lucky and gay
while we must slave and toil
I know now, this plan, I must foil.
(Dedicated to all the counter-revolutionaries of the Bolshevik Revolution.)
That was completely off the top of my head and I am proud of it's idea value. I am disappointed it is not as good as other poems on the poem scale... but on my scale I like it. Thank you.
"Revolution-Return"
by Michael "Boris" Catalano
So mournful
is the funeral
passing by
the poor man
who fought the ban
on our liberty
He was killed
and the grave filled
they said "put your head down on the choppin' block"
he replied "no,
because I know,
it is wrong to commit suicide. You must force me down"
They used force
Though his mind's a horse
his body is starved and feeble
He was killed that day
and must be lucky and gay
while we must slave and toil
I know now, this plan, I must foil.
(Dedicated to all the counter-revolutionaries of the Bolshevik Revolution.)
That was completely off the top of my head and I am proud of it's idea value. I am disappointed it is not as good as other poems on the poem scale... but on my scale I like it. Thank you.