Can Barely Hide, chapter 8

[spurkycreations]

TITLE: Can Barely Hide, chapter 8
PAIRING: Reno X Cloud
AUTHORS: lilymoon1 as Reno, grygon as Cloud
RATING: NC-17
WORD COUNT: 6,143
NOTES: This is a RPG between the two writers but we treated it as a fanfic. Edited slightly for spelling and fragments. Please enjoy and remember: comments are love. :)

CHAPTER SUMMARY: Some bondage takes a bad turn as Cloud's

Comments

[ldyavalon]

Poor Cloud!!! After 5 years in the labs bondage is obviously not harmless fun...

Beautiful scene :)

[spurkycreations]

thank you. :)

and chapter 9 is up.

[squall_cloud_me]

"Cloud, we still, I...damn. I need to take those balls from you." A hot blush swept over his face. (Priceless line)
The beginning made me blush, but, after Clouds burning memories came into play, I saddened. Reno is like a puppy; always cheerful and energetic. It makes me feel uneasy when he's hurting due to Cloud's hurting. However, the ending was so beautiful! Please keep up the great work.
Reno & Cloud rock!!!

[spurkycreations]

:)

lots of chapters in queue. :) chapter 9 is up.

[sirenskywalker]

aaaaaaaaaaaaw.poor guys. Cloud shouldn'tprovoke Reno so.^w^

[spurkycreations]

cloud loves to push those buttons...

chapter 9 is waiting. :)

[yaoi_lover111]

*TEAR* how sad its good but very sad

[spurkycreations]

we do love to torture them... just wait.

chapter 9 is up though! :)

[uruchan]

Torturing bishi's -- par for the course. Just promise me a happy ending and I'll follow you to the end of the...um...well, the end of the fic, at any rate. :)

[spurkycreations]

so far we don't have an end. but yes, it has it's ups and downs. :) i promise an up soon.

chapter 9 is up!

[uruchan]

Yay! Ups and downs are good. But no cutting and/or dying anybody's hair. Or removing any fingers or toes... That's *so* unsexy ::smirk::

[spurkycreations]

oh gawds *facepalm* :)