Chapter Deleted

[angelicvampyre]

From the comments I am not up to writing this chapter, I stuffed up. Sorry. I will whipe the slate clean and leave it for someone else who can write to do it.

Sorry again.

Comments

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[issoossi]

Oh no, I like it very much. Thank you for continuing the story

[facingthesun]

Wowee, it's good to see that someone wants to continue the story. ;)

Ummm...

[karbear57]

I've read this chapter... and the last one and I'm confused. I hope who ever chooses to do the next chapter can try to make them fit together.

Re: Ummm...

[angelicvampyre]

Sorry I kind of have this image of two spike/williams. We have the little meek william at work but come play time he is Spike. That's why I gave the two different names, sitting them together, getting the two world to join is going to be the fun. Well that's what I thought anyway.

Sorry.

[phullara]

I liked it a lot....I think that this chapter fits in well because William could be different outside of work with his friends. He might be for comfortable.

[angelicvampyre]

Thats what I was going for. Also allows people who are not so good at writting meek William to have some fun with Spike.

[facingthesun]

So. You didn't like meek William so you rewrote the characters in a way that was completely different from the first chapter?

[angelicvampyre]

No more that we have two sides of spike/william the one where he is in the office, where the power is shifted to Buffy. However when he is out with his friends the rules change, the power shifts. that's more what I was trying to get, to see the two sides of the person. Maybe I messed up, sorry if I did.

[wicked_bitter]

I liked the hot spuffy sex. lol. I can't wait for the next chapter, and too see what happens at the office!

nice job done.

[angelicvampyre]

I was thinking that they would not fall on each other so soon, however it just kind of happened. I mean I put Spike and Buffy in a room together and well, opps spuffyness will happen!

[wicked_bitter]

I totally agree, lol.