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[facingthesun]

This is my attempt of the first chapter. I’m kinda iffy towards it myself. If you all agree that it’s blah, my feelings won’t be hurt if we go to the cowboy story (because I know at least one girlie who would like that, right?)

Next to write is eternaletoile (if she still wants to)

Comments

I liked it

[anonymous]

It is kind of a different Buffy, but I liked it just the same. Keep going.

Re: I liked it

[facingthesun]

I like my Buffys kinda insane, I can't help it. ;)

[karbear57]

Great chapter and set up for the rest of the sotry. Who's next?

[facingthesun]

I'm going to email you, stay tuned...

[spikesbabyblues]

ooh fab chapter. Buffy is rather amusing in the fic so far.

[nessaelerrina]

very interesting. can't quite get a beat on your Buffy. but I bet that quality is going to be the very thing that draws William in. poor boy, he won't stand a chance. wheee! can't wait for the UST to really get kicked into gear. this one looks to have much smutty promise. great beginning!

[megan_peta]

I had no idea this warden series thing was happening. It's great so far. How old is Buffy supposed to be? And seeing William strip himself of Spike so that he can be respectable? Priceless...but atleast he hung on to the real Spike...the hair!