never lose your heart, use your head.

Jun 13, 2008 08:51

title: Stopping Here
summary: "Make it last, make it important." Bookverse.
rating: PG
a/n: This is me being late for the Letters prompt at wicked_prompts. Whoops.

They should have to think! )

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ariestess June 13 2008, 15:04:03 UTC
Okay, that was quite fascinating...Very interesting...

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spud14 June 13 2008, 23:12:44 UTC
Thank you very much!

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so_confusifying June 13 2008, 15:36:40 UTC
Ooohh this is... very interesting indeed. It doesn't start off so dark but it is, there is so much emotion behind everything that's said even if you don't realize it at first. I looooove how you wrote Tibbett! I love how even though he's gone a little insane, he seems to understand the deep stuff better, though it doesn't come out that way to anyone but Elphie (and the reader of course). I hope that makes sense...

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spud14 June 13 2008, 23:14:23 UTC
Hee, it was so hard to write some nutso Tibbett. I'm so glad you like it

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top_hatted_girl June 13 2008, 20:15:29 UTC
I don't know what to say. This devastated me.

At first, I didn't know what to make of it: the style's so disjointed, so confusing. Upon reading it again, I realized- it is Elphaba's mind, it is Tibbett's mind, it is the mess that the entire group of friends has made of their lives. Confused and dizzy and indelicate and nothing like the dreams they once had together.

And yet, in the story, in certain lines, certain descriptions, there is an incongruous beauty- the grace all of them had once, a memory of something beautiful in the tragedies they've each become.

I don't know if that made any sense at all, but suffice to say I loved it.

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spud14 June 13 2008, 23:17:11 UTC
Aw, thank you so much. I feel like I should say more than "You make me blush so hard" but that's pretty much absolutely true. Thoughtful reviews = epically amazing.

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in48frames June 13 2008, 20:25:48 UTC
She is silk, she is a kitten, she is the deepest sleep.

That is such perfect imagery. I loved this. And how it all tied together.

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spud14 June 13 2008, 23:17:40 UTC
Thanks so much! And I love love love your icon, oh my god.

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colliding_kiss June 13 2008, 23:06:37 UTC
erin is sad panda. :[ *joins sebastian and kerry in corner*

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colliding_kiss June 13 2008, 23:09:30 UTC
PS. YOU DO WORDS GOOD.

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spud14 June 13 2008, 23:12:20 UTC
IT'S ANTHONY, STUPID. NOW I HATE YOU FOREVER.

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colliding_kiss June 13 2008, 23:38:44 UTC
NO ANTHONY NEVER WENT TO THE SAND PANDA CORNER. SEBASTIAN DID BECAUSE HE CAUGHT ANNALEIGH AND STEPHANIE HAVING SEX.

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