I liked this - it has a strangely tense atmosphere do it which I think is quite nicely done! I wish I could write effective drabbles - yours is succinct yet conveys a lot, well done. :)
Really well written drabble, so much said in so few words! I wish I had that talent. I love the feeling the whole thing had and the description of Fernando XXX
That's a really nice drabble we've got here! I like it a lot (but can't tell what I like - like casi_casi said, it's like it has a strangely tense atmosphere) :)
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I wish I could write effective drabbles - yours is succinct yet conveys a lot, well done. :)
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PS totally forgot to comment on your last post O.o I'll get right on it
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I couldn't get that Nando description how I wanted it so I'm glad it wasn't horrible lol
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