somthing new.. maybe?

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Okay, let's see here, I wrote some new lyrics today

I don't know what everyone else thought of my other lyrics that I showed at school, but oh well.. that was just a test lyrics thing. This one is more clear and more of making clear to what's going on, as to my other lyrics where it was just random saying.

So here it goes, just something I whipped up when I was watching some TV, and geez.. its so hot x.x;

Anyways:

Let me go on with my life,
What ever happened to the simple things?
Harder and harder it gets,
Whenever I start to think about it

(Chorus)(maybe here)
I've got to chill out,
I've got to be Patient
I've got to let,
Let some things go
(/Chorus)

Why think about this?(it)
Why face the problem?
It's so clear to everyone else,
It's not so clear to me

Smoke trough my eyes,
Can't see, low visibility begins
People surrounding me,
Wondering what's wrong with me(maybe edit here)

(Chorus)

I can see clearly, Everything near me
I can see people, wondering whats wrong
I can see that one special person,
I think she can see me(maybe edit here)

(/end)

So yeah thats it. x.x;
I dunno, its just somthing im starting out with on my own free time, other then this lj :D

Comment on this please! :P
edit: oh yeah and if i made some mistakes, tell me
if it doesnt sound right, tell me :D