Fic: "Ceremony of Innocence" for junediamanti

Apr 11, 2006 23:15

Title: Ceremony of Innocence
Author: parallactic
Recipient's name: junediamanti
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Lily, Sirius, James, Remus, and Peter
Summary: Harry was born in the middle of a war, during a time of uncertainty and doubt.

Ceremony of Innocence )

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Comments 17

cmwinters April 12 2006, 04:18:02 UTC
*blink*

Wow.

And I say again....wow.

Several times, in fact.

Wow.

(Quite eloquent, I am, yes...)

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junewilliams7 April 12 2006, 06:48:39 UTC
Ditto. (says she who can't even find new words to say "wow"....)

Lucky June Diamanti....

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parallactic May 3 2006, 18:03:01 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my fic.

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parallactic May 3 2006, 18:02:30 UTC
What you've already said is eloquent enough, and quite complementary. :) Thank you.

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basiliskfairy April 12 2006, 04:28:29 UTC
This was great! I loved the characterizations, and the OC you used - totally illustrated your point. Also really liked the Bones thing - chilling. Lovely fic.

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parallactic May 3 2006, 18:03:38 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the characterizations, and that the Bones family worked for you. :)

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parallactic May 3 2006, 18:36:08 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed reading the fic, since I wasn't sure if this was an alternate enough take on canon. :D I enjoyed writing the foreshadowing. Thank you for the feedback.

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tree_and_leaf April 12 2006, 08:59:52 UTC
Wow. This is wonderful. Is it Ok if I add it to my memories?

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parallactic May 3 2006, 18:11:41 UTC
Thank you! Of course you can add it to your memories. :)

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tta April 12 2006, 11:09:29 UTC
I'll echo the rest of the comments and say: WOW.

This is amazing. The writing is perfect and everything feels so real and incredibly tragic and awful.

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parallactic May 3 2006, 18:18:53 UTC
Thanks! :) I always thought the first war would be awful.

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