That was a great take on McGonagall's character, and a very interesting story! I must admit that Dumbledore's reaction to Ron and Hermione's death seems terribly blasé to me, but I can't help thinking that this is quite IC for him, given the way he keeps endangering students in the books when it suits his purposes...
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! And, yeah. I had some trouble writing Dumbledore in this, but I sort of had that same thought, about him always putting the students in danger.
Oh, this is well done! Nicely written and emotionally powerful. What was particularly interesting to me was how well you caught the quality of youthful insecurity in the face of new responsibilities that never seems to leave anybody, regardless of how old they get.
Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this. I had so much trouble writing parts of this, and wasn't sure if I had gotten the themes across in the end or not, so it's nice to know that I managed. :)
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I love this insight into Minerva. It was a wonderful character sketch.
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