Fraught (Eyeshield 21, Hiruma/Mamori)

[anenko]

Title: Fraught
Author: anenko
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Dorky humour?
Prompt: June 14 - Eyeshield 21, Yoichi Hiruma/Mamori Anezaki: Valentine's day - a different way of saying 'I love you'.

Comments

[misura]

Ooh, loved this from start to finish. People's reactions to Mamori's having brought Valentine's chocolate were simply perfect (the way Sena and Monta backed up Mamori's ploy could have come straight from the manga and had me beaming) and the Valentine's gift she gave Hiruma was just ... both inventive and very fitting.

Thank you so much!

[anenko]

Thank you! It took me a *long* time to figure out what the "different way of saying 'I love you'" should be, but once I decided on the swearing, the story pretty much wrote itself.

I've come to terms with the fact that my writing comfort zone is "dork." *g*

I'm really happy that you liked the story.

[ednama]

Yay! Loved this, very IC.