shelter from the rain (Bleach, Shunsui/Nanao/Ukitake, M)

Jun 26, 2008 15:44

Title: shelter from the rain
Author: incandescens
Rating: M
Warnings: Noises off.
Word count: 2302
Prompt: June 25th - Bleach, Shunsui/Nanao/Ukitake: hot springs--"That can't be right"

shelter from the rain )

bleach, incandescens

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shayheyred June 26 2008, 15:01:55 UTC
This is a perfect gem of a story, with so much atmosphere and extremely tangible emotions and appropriately off-stage sex that carries on through the story like a powerful undertow. Very, very lovely work.

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incandescens June 26 2008, 15:19:41 UTC
Thank you very much indeed!

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phishy June 26 2008, 16:01:35 UTC
Beautiful work. I loved how seamlessly you blended the imagery and dialogue. And the Shunsui/Nanao/Ukitake dynamics in general. They were perfect.

I've always liked Shunsui/Nanao, but now I'm really starting to go for the threesome. And every permutation thereof. :)

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incandescens June 27 2008, 09:25:28 UTC
Very glad you like it!

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incandescens June 27 2008, 09:30:19 UTC
Please, KT, let them survive the series!

And thank you. :)

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necrovalentine June 26 2008, 17:40:33 UTC
This is wonderful - I like the language and the feel of the story, so smooth and flowing and yet... just that tension - I've also always really liked Shunshi/Nanao, but you're making me a fan of the threesomes and their varying incarnations as well!

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incandescens June 27 2008, 09:29:37 UTC
Thank you very much!

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imladra June 28 2008, 14:02:36 UTC
I love these three. And this was just wonderful.

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incandescens June 29 2008, 15:05:18 UTC
Thank you very much!

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