So We Keep Hanging On (X/1999, Kusanagi/Yuzuriha)

[reversedhymnal]

Title: So We Keep Hanging On
Author: reversedhymnal
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Uh, all standard CLAMP warnings apply? 8D;
Word count: 2,055
Summary: There are reasons why the world should not end.
A/N: X, Kusanagi/Yuzuriha: author's choice - light Also. They’re so cute, :<

Comments

[laryna6]

Not my prompt, and not even one of the ones I was watching for, but that's partially because I'm bad with names and got Kusanagi mixed up with Karen Kasumi.

Not that I'm against yuri or yaoi, but random yuri vs a pairing this, as you said, cute?

It's great to see them done, and done well. The specific sex act here also is an example of how IC you kept this piece, although I'm probably missing a lot of this fic because I'm rusty on the series.

In any case, great fic!

[reversedhymnal]

Lol, so your comment was a little confusing, but I think I get the gist of it? And I have to admit, anything with Karen is HOT HOT HOT so, ♥

Thanks for the compliments though! :D I'm always pleased when I get kudos for IC~

[laryna6]

I didn't think this prompt would be good because I thought it said Kasumi, and even hot yuri loses to cute canon, to rephrase. So this is better than what I thought it would be. Sorry the phrasing was confusing.

[reversedhymnal]

*laughs!* All right, much clearer! And no worries, haha! I also see your point, mmm, they're too cute to be real, D: Thanks again for reading! I appreciate it!

[allira_dream]

I seriously don't know why you were nervous about this: your genius shines through this through and through, and you make poetry of everything you touch.

This is no exception: oh, Yuzuriha so brave and smart and amazing, and Kusanagi being in quiet, surprised shock of this wonderful, bright young woman he knows it's just so. GUH.

Completely, absolutely amazing, baby. Simply incredible.

[reversedhymnal]

*blush* Thank you, Baby. ♥ Y, you know me. I'm paranoid, and I still think I could have done better. I know what my problem is though, now! ANDs. D: I need to use them less! They're making me freak out!

Thank you so muuuuuuch, ♥ Such high praise from you, *happy sighs* I can go to sleep content now, :D

[tiamatschild]

Oh, this is just awesome! I think my favorite part is Yuzuriha telling Kusanagi that if he's doing something he feels he needs to apologize for, then he's making the wrong choice. I just. So true.

Eeeeee otp I love them this is awesome! :D :D :D

[reversedhymnal]

HEE. Thanks so much! :D :D I really like that scene, too, it felt good to write it, you know? ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed!

[asia_ck]

Just as I had almost given up looking for Yuzuriha/Kusanagi what should I find? Lo and behold, not only is there fic, it's GOODfic.

I loved this piece, I think you've captured their characters just right.

Tiny nitpick - in this sentence "Kusanagi’s apartment is not in one piece, but gas isn’t leaking, and it’s warmer than outside;" you seem to have briefly switched tenses from the rest of the fic. If it's a stylistic choice then never mind me :)

[24snowyli_chan]

this is very well writen and not once did i feel an awkward moment in this~its lovely and re-freshing to read a fic with this pairing ^^