A Fitting End (Final Fantasy X, Yojimbo/Shiva)

[rosehiptea]

Title: A Fitting End
Author/Artist: rosehiptea
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: het smut, PWP
Word count: 1,613
Summary: Yojimbo and Shiva share wine and deal with what’s left of their human natures.
A/N: For the prompt: Final Fantasy X, Yojimbo/Shiva: Drinking partners - They were the only fayth who had truly lived before they slept, and the only ones who

Comments

[jlsigman]

I almost took this prompt, then didn't because I wasn't sure what all I could do with it.

You blew anything I could have managed out of the water. Wonderful job!

[rosehiptea]

Aw... I don't know about that, but I'm still really glad if I did a good job. They both kind of fascinate me. Thanks so much!

[queenoftheskies]

Ooooh, great story. I love the character interaction, the way they quip at one another and then how they give in.

I enjoyed reading this.

[rosehiptea]

Thank you so much!

I was going to search for an actual elaborate dirty joke, or at least the punchline of one, but I decided to content myself with a little overcompensation humor. Which was going to involve Tidus but I also decided they weren't going to bother with likes of Tidus.

I'm really glad you liked it. It was fun to write.

[threewalls]

I liked this. There's a delicacy, an acknowledgement of how transitory this encounter can be, how transitory their existence is.

[rosehiptea]

Thank you! It started out as a more straightforward kind of thing, but then I got to thinking about where they were and who and what they were, and felt like I did have to acknowledge that. I'm really glad you liked it.

[janegray]

That was wonderful, I really loved it. I especially liked how you characterized both Yojimbo and Shiva, he is a real gentleman and she is confident and sweet.

she felt only his hands gently stroking his thighs apart

I think you mean "her thighs".

[rosehiptea]

Thank you! It was hard to characterize them but I'm glad if it came off believable.

And I certainly did mean that. *fixes it* Thanks.

[eerian_sadow]

oh, honey. this is beautiful and bittersweet and perfect. i didn't pick the prompt up myself because i didn't think i could do it justice, but you did wonderfully. i love it.

[rosehiptea]

Aw... *blush* Thank you so much. It was a great prompt and I'm so glad if I did something good with it.