Comments | springkink: Loveless, (Seimei/Soubi)

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Loveless, (Seimei/Soubi)

Jul 16, 2007 00:05

Title: Enraptured.
Author/Artist: allira_dream
Rating: NC17.
Warnings: M/s and sadomasochism undertones.
Word count: 1195.
Summary: If Seimei wants to use him, he will. It's not his place to offer.
A/N: Prompt: Loveless, Seimei/Soubi: Submission - 'Submission is the only good;/Let me become an instrument sharply stringed/For all things to strike music as they ( Read more... )

allira_dream, loveless

Comments 10

faldrengirl July 16 2007, 05:40:45 UTC

Hot. but, aaaaw... poor littke thing my Soubi...
Can I have one too? plz?

allira_dream July 16 2007, 20:28:11 UTC

Ritsuka goes all clingy and glares and huffs like a little kitten. Careful, he bites o.o

tekalynn July 16 2007, 06:11:51 UTC

Poor Soubi. ;_;

Excellently written!

allira_dream July 16 2007, 20:30:42 UTC

I wouldn't say sorry since he, you know, didn't mind.

I've another Loveless piece (Ritsuka/Soubi) where he gave me HELL AND HELL to write because in it h-he wasn't submissive enough. The bastard D=

berseker July 16 2007, 07:28:53 UTC

*SQUEEEE*

This is so powerful. And HOTT! But what I like the most is the complete submission, all this devotion... *sighs* You write Soubi so sexy it hurts. ^_^

allira_dream July 16 2007, 20:33:28 UTC

Thank you so much! And, yes. I think Soubi is the sub-est character I have ever written. EVER. Which is why he makes Ritsuka - and me! - headdesk so much. Soooo not used to someone like that.

vissy July 17 2007, 10:36:21 UTC

Mmm, tasty little story! I do enjoy Soubi on his knees and so happy to be there.

allira_dream July 17 2007, 17:20:38 UTC

He so totally is. Any Dominant/Master wet dream, I swear. He was all too happy to stay on his knees and do as Seimei ordered.

It sort of drives Ritsuka crazy in the 'not understanding' way ^^'.

Thanks for reading!

xenocide_now July 30 2007, 16:50:54 UTC

Superbly written. My admiration for your craft is starting to have no boundries. You simply rock my socks. Your characterization is astounding as well.

The only problem I have here is that if Kouya and Yamato could de-ear each other without the traditional penetration (girls just can't do that to each other, of course), I believe Seimei would lose his ears as well, if he had oral sex with *anybody*. But that's just me =) I'm anal like that =P

allira_dream July 30 2007, 19:57:16 UTC

Eh, well, so far how ears are lost is still very vague in Loveless so most of the times I sort of decide that unless there are uglies bumping together, it doesn't count as real sex.

... which goes against my general thoughts about how frottage/oral/mutual masturbation counts as sex but there you go :p the exception to the rule and all.