Ranma 1/2: Ranma/Ryouga/Akane

[forgottenlover]

Title: Outed
Author: forgottenlover
Rating: PG
Warnings: Not really
Word count: 1155
Summary: Ryouga finally gets outed as being P-chan.

Comments

[icedark_elf]

*pets all the people* You know it'll happen someday, and she will not take it well at -all-.

[forgottenlover]

Oh god no. Not with how she takes the tiny little things and this is a big huge thing.

[pegunicent]

You know, I never liked Akane but she has a point that there are some promises that really, you shouldn't keep. >> Although she didn't say it that way.

-hugs her poor boys-

[forgottenlover]

No, she really didn't, but it is how it is, ne?

[rosehiptea]

That was very well done and in character.

I can't really blame Akane for being that upset though.

[forgottenlover]

Thank you, I was rather pleased at how it came out...

Even if I did lose control of it about a third of the way in.

[monique_27]

You know, I still can't decide how Akane would react. I know she'd be hurt and angry no matter how she finds out or what her reaction is in that moment, but it's that very reaction that has so many possibilities, from royally pissed and violent, to brokenly upset, or just very shocked.

This is a nice take though. In-character, well-written, and very emotional. Well done. *^.^*

Also: And if it hurt... Well, nothing new there. <- Awesome line!

[forgottenlover]

Thank you very much! I wasn't sure how this story would form honestly, but I was happy that Akane all of a sudden was coming out perfectly. I was actually rather worried about the voice until I finished it and realized I worried for no reason.

♥ Thank you for liking the line! It felt like a good clincher.

Episode or Manga

[anonymous]

Is it an episode or manga if what you said is real