FFXII - Balthier/Basch

Jul 05, 2007 01:28

Title: Opportunity
Author: RegicidalDwarf
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Not worksafe for sex. Other than that, none.
Word count: 940
A/N: This one fought me for a long time, and I'm still not totally satisfied. Sorry it's late. X-posted in regicidaldwarf2

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strawberry_smut July 5 2007, 08:56:59 UTC
Woodamn.
Loved the little bit of biting and how Balthier just gives up on subtle.
This is my prompt, and it's exactly what I was after.

They form a network of raised welts across the broad span of his shoulders, moving down and around to disappear with the curve of his body. Balthier realizes his hands are tracing them, letting soap suds run down and through the grating in the floor.
I swear, I can nearly feel his skin myself. Great imagery.

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regicidaldwarf July 5 2007, 09:00:51 UTC
Yay! I'm glad I could give you what you wanted, particularly since this one fought me for a really long time. (I had to make it present tense to even get anywhere.)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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cognomen July 5 2007, 15:15:59 UTC
I love this relationship, and I really adore seeing the different ways that people make it work. I like it this way, too - you've presented it unspoken, an understanding that both of them have reached more or less on their own, and sometimes the greatest things happen that way.

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regicidaldwarf July 5 2007, 17:53:52 UTC
Thank you! I was a little worried that the lack of real discussion might make it choppy, so I'm glad it worked for you.

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manic_intent July 6 2007, 08:12:15 UTC
hot. thanks for sharing!

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