I really liked this! Hakkai is the only one who can speak to Sanzo about abandoning them and his thought that he's alone in this, and it even took him drugging and tying him up. His belief that muichimotsu means cutting himself off from people and that he doesn't need the rest of them are some of the most irritating aspects of Sanzo's personality for me. Nice job with the dialogue and inner thoughts.
Also, thank you for making the dub-con less extreme than it could have been; it made it believable.
Thank you! I was sweating a bit about the dubcon -- it's not something I'm accustomed to writing. But Sanzo made it easy, cranky bastard that he is. ^_~
Hey, I think this might have been my prompt, woohoo! :) I love Hakkai being the twisted bastard and Sanzo recognizing it and yet being excited by it-- acknowledging his own twists; Hakkai being there to point out the flaws in Sanzo's arguments; and you get mondo bonus points for use of the word "obstreperous." Great job!
Yay, so happy you liked it! :D I bet if Hakkai was reincarnated in our world, he'd be an editor at Harvard University Press and would use words like "obstreperous" all the time, especially during kinky sex with his assistant editors Sanzo Gojyo Sanzo and Gojyo. XD
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Also, thank you for making the dub-con less extreme than it could have been; it made it believable.
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Someone needs to write that AU. ^_~
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