Autumn Nights [Yami no Matsuei, Muraki/Oriya, R]- sorry it's late

[arizonaicerose]

Title: Autumn Nights.
Author: arizonaiceroseDisclaimer: I don’t own it nor do I imply that I do. I am only borrowing the Yami no Matsuei characters and world for my own fun

Comments

[mereprototype]

I enjoyed this a lot. The sad tone fit with the prompt well and it made me feel very sorry for poor Oriya.

[arizonaicerose]

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

I always thought that poor Oriya needed a hug after everything Muraki has put him through.

[mightymaeve]

Once again, Arizonaicerose, you have written a piece with emotional punch!

I was amazed at how you kept Muraki in character--so cold--and yet the scene was so intensely hot. It was very believeable with the complex--and tragic--emotions of Oriya.

I especially liked this visual:

"Cold hands, colder then what the chilled weather should have caused, cover his warm ones and in a fluid movement tugs his flimsy grasp on the coat free before leading him backwards to the cold, rusted, metal frame of the swings."

[arizonaicerose]

Yay! Thank you so much.

I'm so happy that I was able to keep Muraki in character- since I am the complete opposite of him- so writing him was really hard.

I'm glad you liked this story.

Oh and beautiful icon!

[sphinxofthenile]

Lovely, lovely fic, especially loved the ending!

[arizonaicerose]

Yay thank you!

Re: Prompter here

[arizonaicerose]

Your welcome! I had fun with this one, the prompt was so fun!