Happy Spring asunder!

[nickelodeon]

Title: For All The Stars
Recipient's name: asunder
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Yanagi/Yukimura
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created by Konomi Takeshi. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Warnings: None
Author's notes: None

Comments

[bouncy]

I... Think I'll have to come back and properly review because currently? I'm like this:

Pigtails: *__________*
Ciaran: HOW. JUST. YES
Pigtails: I KNOOOOOOOW
Ciaran: KHJGKHJGUKYUIYUIKGUKGKGJK
Pigtails: *_______________________*
Ciaran: OH GOD
Ciaran: HOW TO REPLY TO THAT?
Ciaran: LHKJYIUOYUOYUOYUIGHKGK
Pigtails: I DON'T EVEN KNOW
Pigtails: sldkjfldsjfldkjfldsjf
Ciaran: I. JUST - WHAT?HGKGKH
Ciaran: ,KGJJKGKGKHJGK
Pigtails: NOW I HAVE TWO AMAZING YANAYUKI FICS TO REVIEW AN DLSJFLKDSJFKJFDS
Ciaran: YEEES
Ciaran: HKMGHKFGKHFHKFKHFHJKFKUTVKH
Pigtails: sldkfjlksdjflkjdflkjdlkjf

[rancidmelody]

eep. pretty *_*

too bad about the lack of snogging, though XD

[mousapelli]

i love the dynamic you have of the whole team, and how everybody is off-balance with Yukimura gone, but it's also a different sort of off-balance when he returns.

Very lovely. And the feeling like Inui line cracked me up XD

[empath_eia]

I love your Yukimura more than words.

And those notes in the middle? Perfect, beautiful win. ♥

[maxine_chan]

I really, really enjoyed this. I love how you write Rikkai and your Yukimura is perfect, too. This?:

"None of the team is to know anything. I do not want to falter before any of them and to play a game against a sub-regular, and possibly lose-" and there, Yukimura's mouth screws up into something that is completely unfamiliar on his face and Yanagi's heart lurches - "would wreck havoc within the team, discourage our morale. I won't allow it."

I think that made the fic for me. You feel so bad for Yukimura, but you're also kind of awed by his determination. I love it. Great job!!!