Happy Spring illuminations!

Apr 03, 2007 15:37

Title: A Little Less Conversation
Recipient's name: illuminations
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Yanagi/Yukimura
Author's Notes: I gave this pairing my best shot, illuminations. I hope you enjoy it.

Happy spring illuminations! )

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muzivitch April 3 2007, 20:47:58 UTC
OMG, I love this to little bits and pieces. The interaction between Yukimura and Renji, between Renji and Inui, Kirihara as captain, the very idea that Renji CONSIDERED asking Kirihara for advice. It was all awesome. Great job!

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vacivity April 3 2007, 21:19:51 UTC
This was awesome! The interaction between all of them was excellent, I loved your Renji, and Yukimura teasing, and Sanada. Sanada was perfect!

Wonderful job.

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illuminations April 3 2007, 21:34:08 UTC
I WILL COME BACK TO THIS WHEN I'M NOT, I DON'T KNOW, VERBALLY KEYSMASHING ALL OVER THE PLACE.

*___________*

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link621 April 3 2007, 21:39:33 UTC
This is just plain wonderful. Such a great concept and it all came together so well.

And Yanagi thought of the Nationals games between Tezuka and Yukimura, how the aura in the stadium had exploded, how he had gripped the railing in front of him hard. It hadn't been just Yukimura's doing; Tezuka had been on fire during that match too.

Of course, I picture this quite literally after reading the most recent chapters. Made me laugh out loud. :D;

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mousapelli April 3 2007, 21:54:28 UTC
LOL, this is so cute and hilarious, the phone calls to Inui especially, but all of Rikkai. Variable A and Variable B kept getting funnier and funnier the more Renji said it, until i was giggling every time i read it.

Great fic!

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