Dear my *cough*anon*cough* writer... I have suspicion who you are..but i save it for later *wink* Some points I looovee X3 :
1. I did word count ... 17,994 words *whistle* omg you really serious....!!*squish* ♥
2. I enjoyed their conversation so much. And the humour ♥
3. Good job with Oshitari (lawyer?!XD) and the Hyoutei bits. I adore Atobe and Oshitari friendship :D :D :D
4. FERRARI! ♥ Atobe and Tez in a ferrari ... XD
5. Atobe imagined him in Italy: brown skin and white shirt; sunglasses pushed up into his hair; sipping beer on a balcony, in an apartment that overlooked the city. ... I have pretty mental image. Mm.. yummy Tez ♥XDXD
6. Atobe shrugged, grinning widely. Water glittered on his stomach. His jeans were wet and clinging, drawn down slightly. Tezuka stole a brief glance at his hipbones, sharp angles he couldn't help but be attracted to. *drools* I like sharp hipbones... X3
7. The fishing (they share same hobby, why not!♥) .. and swimming in the lake, I..I..have no words than.. YOU'RE WONDERFUL ♥ *dazed from pretty imageries in her poor minds*
8. The diving competition is much love XD
9. Tezuka ruined Atobe's car is ... ahahah~~~ XD Your Tezzie is very amusing ♥
10. The sex! omg that'S HOT! XD (I feel lucky I requested "sexual situation", lol~~ ♥) Atobe was straddling his thighs; he leaned down, victorious and complacent. "Are you going to thrust, then? I'm not moving my hand." .... ..."Are you going to thrust? I'm not moving mine either." .... Tezuka smirked. "I was just thinking... it's just another tie-break really, isn't it?" XDDD ♥!!!
Very very well done, my lovely anon writer... I.. don't know how to thank you *__* ♥ This is more than a wonderful fic. I love you ♥♥♥
Some points I looovee X3 :
1. I did word count ... 17,994 words *whistle* omg you really serious....!!*squish* ♥
2. I enjoyed their conversation so much. And the humour ♥
3. Good job with Oshitari (lawyer?!XD) and the Hyoutei bits. I adore Atobe and Oshitari friendship :D :D :D
4. FERRARI! ♥ Atobe and Tez in a ferrari ... XD
5. Atobe imagined him in Italy: brown skin and white shirt; sunglasses pushed up into his hair; sipping beer on a balcony, in an apartment that overlooked the city.
... I have pretty mental image. Mm.. yummy Tez ♥XDXD
6. Atobe shrugged, grinning widely. Water glittered on his stomach. His jeans were wet and clinging, drawn down slightly. Tezuka stole a brief glance at his hipbones, sharp angles he couldn't help but be attracted to.
*drools* I like sharp hipbones... X3
7. The fishing (they share same hobby, why not!♥) .. and swimming in the lake, I..I..have no words than.. YOU'RE WONDERFUL ♥ *dazed from pretty imageries in her poor minds*
8. The diving competition is much love XD
9. Tezuka ruined Atobe's car is ... ahahah~~~ XD Your Tezzie is very amusing ♥
10. The sex! omg that'S HOT! XD (I feel lucky I requested "sexual situation", lol~~ ♥)
Atobe was straddling his thighs; he leaned down, victorious and complacent. "Are you going to thrust, then? I'm not moving my hand."
....
..."Are you going to thrust? I'm not moving mine either."
....
Tezuka smirked. "I was just thinking... it's just another tie-break really, isn't it?" XDDD ♥!!!
Very very well done, my lovely anon writer... I.. don't know how to thank you *__* ♥ This is more than a wonderful fic. I love you ♥♥♥
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