Sorry for the late reply, and I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story. Yukimura/Sanada's one of my favorite pairings, but they're not for everyone; I'm happy you liked it regardless.
Subways are such a convenient way to start off things. :D
I really, really loved your characterization of Yukimura in this fic. The way he handles Mr. Pervert on the train and not knowing whether or not he should place his personal feelings above the team, showing both confidence and uncertainty - really awesome. :D
I also loved the bits of humor in this. Yukimura teasing Sanada about his hat, making Yanagi play doubles with Kirihara - I think I just really enjoyed that I could picture them so easily.
Lastly, I have to say that Yanagi being in there and knowing everything and making fun only made everything better.
Oh, wow. Thanks so much for the lovely comment, and I'm sorry it took me so long to respond. I've read some great porn that takes place on the subway, so when bouncy requested a scene set there, I was happy to comply. I'm very glad that you liked Yukimura's characterization, as well. A lot of my intent in writing this story was to create a version of him that was neither a delicate flower nor an utter asshole (both of which I've seen repeatedly in fic), and it's wonderful to hear that it worked for you.
nice, well-paced and lovely. I love how deadpan Sanada is about everything, and how Yukimura plays off it so well. Also the Renji phone call was terrific. Very nice!
Thank you so much, and I apologize for the late reply. The phone call between Yanagi and Yukimura I tried to write as though it were between an Inui and a Tezuka that had better social skills; I'm very glad that it worked for you.
Sorry about the late reply, but thanks for the comment, and thank you so much again for your beta. You really were an immeasurable help, and I appreciate it a great deal.
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I really, really loved your characterization of Yukimura in this fic. The way he handles Mr. Pervert on the train and not knowing whether or not he should place his personal feelings above the team, showing both confidence and uncertainty - really awesome. :D
I also loved the bits of humor in this. Yukimura teasing Sanada about his hat, making Yanagi play doubles with Kirihara - I think I just really enjoyed that I could picture them so easily.
Lastly, I have to say that Yanagi being in there and knowing everything and making fun only made everything better.
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