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Happy Spring Everyone!

Apr 13, 2007 12:31

Title: Sweet the Sting
Recipient's name: For the lovers, the dreamers and me.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Momoshiro/Kaidoh
Summary: Momo decides it's Kaidoh's fault; after all, he started it.
Word Count: ~3850
Author's notes: You have no idea how thrilled I was to get your request. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it! Thank you ( Read more... )

Comments 34

sivullinen April 13 2007, 17:36:50 UTC

But Momo does it anyway, kisses Kaidoh because he wanted to and damned if it wouldn't be worth the bruises. That's something Momo has realized. Nothing is ever easy with Kaidoh. It's all hurdles and obstacles. But the end result is worth it.

Oh I love those boys, and you write them just right ♥

happiestwhen May 19 2007, 22:48:51 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥

waxrose April 13 2007, 20:44:19 UTC

It feels exhilarating, just like everything they do together.

*feeble whimpers*

You win. At everything. Ohgod. This was WONDERFUL and BOYISH and SO THEM that it's just aksks;s;jdk. Somehow this feels quite familiar...:D

happiestwhen May 19 2007, 22:49:22 UTC

Hee, thank you so much, Erica! ♥♥ Really glad you liked it.

umeko_pyon April 13 2007, 22:26:13 UTC

*randomly navigates back to this tab and sees the recipient name* Oh, so that's why I suddenly had to search this out a few minutes ago!

Anyway, on to the fic. Akfhjlfdkhjlfdkshjlksfjdkfsdg. MOMO. XDDD This is hilarious and amazing and dlfkhboisfdhoisrlhksgf;dflhasdfog. I loved this part:

Kaidoh doesn’t snore, doesn’t breathe loudly, and hasn’t even really moved from the position he was in when Momo got back to the dormitory after their fight. Momo wonders if maybe Kaidoh’s dead. Maybe a bee stung him and he's dead. If Kaidoh is dead, Momo would have to kill him. He can't just die after kissing Momo on the lips and then running away. That would be really stupid.

AHAHAHAHALDkghfdalkhjdf. AHAHAHA. HAHAHA.

This writing style is VERY familiar, but I can't place it. D:

happiestwhen May 19 2007, 22:50:42 UTC

I really like Kermit. :) Steph named the recipient well.

Thank you so much! ♥

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happiestwhen May 19 2007, 22:53:01 UTC

Thank you so much! I was really surprised and blushy at your rec; so glad you enjoyed this! ♥

bloodybrilliant April 14 2007, 04:47:10 UTC

Oh god THIS. This is just PERFECT. Its stunningly Momo and Kaidoh and BOYS and rough and fighty and just so so so GREAT. *FLAIL*

I love the beach! ROKKAKU!!! And sand is just wonderful. Sandy hair and pants and shoes and splinters. I love the bees and the exhilaration and He wonders how long it will take for him to be declared the winner. I love Fuji's sleep-chuckle and It's Fuji, though, so chances are he already knows what's going on anyway. ... because he DOES! I love Momo getting STUNG by the bees and Eiji wanting to braid "Kaoru-chan"'s hair! the rubber band and Momo's "I hate you" because he "hates" Kaidoh so hard. :((((( I love everything about this wonderful fic.

I just can't WAIT to find out who wrote it!!!!! WONDERFUL fic, Anon~chan. SO SO PERFECTLY MomoKai. ^_^

happiestwhen May 19 2007, 22:53:09 UTC

Thank you, soulyface. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ♥♥

bloodybrilliant May 21 2007, 03:09:41 UTC

:X I can't believe I didn't know you wrote this. :| After a week or so and someone was speculating I SMACKED myself. *Fail* :X

So so so goood! ♥ ♥ ♥!