Lineage - Chapter One

[sprbitch1313]

Disclaimer:  I own nothing.
Author's Note:  Here you go...kinda long, kinda funny, kinda angsty.

“Come on, let’s go!” she enthuses, hopping in the room, dropping to the bed like a five-year-old on crack.

Sarah almost smiles despite herself, this sad little routine becoming more and more the bright spot of her days.  “No,” she sighs simply, same

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[sprbitch1313]

Why, thank you.

[mlina]

I wish I were part of this family.

“How could she not?”

Brilliant closing line.

So Future's So Bright is done? ;___;

[sprbitch1313]

Thank You. And sometimes I want to be a part of it too.

[erinrua]

Wow, the way the first part ended, I can't say how relieved I am to see Lineage starting right up. Bless you for having mercy on your poor readers, LOL!

Anyhow, just letting you know that I'm still reading and eager to see where you're taking us. :-) (Though I confess that, dispite all the family tragedy and angst, I'm most anxious to see Sam and Dean reconnect. Until they do, I feel like Sam won't be much use to anyone, poor fellow.) Keep up the good work! I'll be watching for and reading chapters to come. :-)
Cheers ~

Erin

[sprbitch1313]

They'll reconnect...they just need a little bit of time. Besides, you know how they are about avoiding chick flick moments, and lately there've been a lot of those.

[spinningfrog]

Well if this is what happens then I'm may have to ignore your pleas to be free from boredom more often. But why do you keep teasing me with tiny hints of dancing? Where is my all-singing, all-dancing story?

[sprbitch1313]

No all singing....but dancing's next.

[spilled_coffee]

Dude, do you have a life? Not that I'm complaining - I was thrilled to see another chapter, um, story up - but I just realized that your posting frequency is amazing. Awesome. Crazy. I could hardy type as fast as you're posting.

But about the story: It's great Ava finally took over the part that only she could take. Only she can be the one to bring back some joy to this family's life. Dean's too close to Sam, grieving too much himself, so that only leaves Ava. Loved the names talk the girls had, because that's sometimes we so often forget. Parents pick names carefully, they think about them a lot before chosing that one name, so it's nice of them to share part of that thinking process.

And I hope Sam does start talking to Sarah again, 'cause she's still there and he doesn't have to miss her too.

I love your fic.

[sprbitch1313]

Yeah, I have a life, but when I get obsessed with an idea, things tend to go by the wayside until I can get it out of my head and down on paper (or computer). So I guess that means that lately I've been a little obsessed, manic.

And, yeah, I sorta thought this role was perfect for Ava too. Glad you agree. And I'm glad you liked the bit about naming their kids b/c...exactly, a lot of thought does, and should, go into it.

[spilled_coffee]

I LOVE your obsession. Hope you're going to be a obsessed maniac a little longer :-)