Thanks for the review! *HUG* lol, but angst and sadness are my middle name! I'm sorry you thought the chapter was too sad, but I think I'm pacing it realistically for this fic because really the fic in general is about two people who go through the ringer and everything keeps getting worse and worse - they both have insecurities and with each new obstacle it will test their marriage, but their love for each other is so strong that even through everything, they make it out and stick together in the end without divorce, and I promise Ch. 6 and Ch. 7 are VERY happy and fluffy. :)
Things will brighten up, but not completely in one chapter. It will be a gradual progression. One more thing will go "right" in each of the next chapters but there will still be plenty of things going wrong. Both characters are in a funk and miserable so chapter 4 is not much more "happy" than this one. I hope you are okay with that. But Ch. 6 is very happy. Ch. 7 is even happier, but this is based on the song too so I want to stay with the pace of the song so keep that in mind too. :)
Things will brighten up, but not completely in one chapter. It will be a gradual progression. One more thing will go "right" in each of the next chapters but there will still be plenty of things going wrong. Both characters are in a funk and miserable so chapter 4 is not much more "happy" than this one. I hope you are okay with that. But Ch. 6 is very happy. Ch. 7 is even happier, but this is based on the song too so I want to stay with the pace of the song so keep that in mind too. :)
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