Fic: Bolt From the Blue

[spoons1899]

Title: Bolt From the Blue
Characters/Pairing: Sam, Dean,
Rating: PG
Word Count: 663
Summary:A storm is coming.
A/N: My default reaction to writer's block seems to be season 4 one-shot bits of angst…

Comments

[geminigrl11]

And there is so much S4 angst to choose from. :) love the ominous tone...and Dean's once-again use of the word "freak." Not to mention the serpent tongues and the way Sam's body's lit up. *shivers*

[suninmybones]

'...only this storm will bring rain and it will be hot and thick like blood.'

'Dean threatens, when what he really wants to say is Stop stop stop Sammy please.'

I love love love this. It's wonderful, and you managed to write both Sam and Dean in exactly the right spaces.

♥

[borgmama1of5]

Whoa, this is dead-on creepy! You used such a small number of words so precisely to convey a terrifying image!

[kwhiteshark]

I love how creepy this feels!

“You’re such a freak,” Dean manages, when what he really wants to say is There’s something wrong with you and I don’t think I can fix it. And this. ♥

[ficwriter1966]

Beautiful! So evocative and chilling. Loved it. :)