Ficathon: Burn Like Magnesium

[clare009]

Burn like Magnesium

Rating: Mature
Pairing: River/Eleventh Doctor
Words: 2700

Summary: The Doctor comes to break River out of the Stormcage and take her on an adventure. River has other ideas.

Notes: This is my submission for the River/Doctor Ficathon written for missvmarigold (merryghoul). Thanks so much to easytheretyger for the beta.

Prompt: Inspired by this: Read more... )

Comments

[lifes_own_light]

Unf. So hot. I love the creative use of the perception filters, and River's fiddling with them so the guards think the Doctor is her. Hotness, creativity, and humor. Just lovely!

[clare009]

Hehe, I love it when River's being all devious. Glad you liked it.

[merryghoul]

Just lovely. Thanks for writing this for me!

[clare009]

Thank you for the fun prompts! It was a pleasure, and I hope it hit the right spots, even though it might have strayed a little bit from the original prompt...

[ddaapp]

Wow

[clare009]

*grins*

[easytheretyger]

The Doctor pushes her back, away from him, and she falls on her arse, legs akimbo, her mouth an 'o' where his cock has just been.

This could be the most perfect line I have ever read.

I could read this a hundred times and not get bored of it. And it's still cruel that you denied them a kiss. ;)

Epilogue?

[clare009]

Perhaps perhaps! I have to finish that other one that we won't mention here first

[jadethe2nd]

I love this! It's hot and clever and fun and the ending is just perfect :D

[clare009]

Aw thanks! I love it when River one-ups the Doctor. Couldn't resist it.