need beta help, please

[just_ruth]

From the spn_summergen Free-For-All; need another pair of eyes and I'm not wholly satisfied with the ending.

Title: The Haunted Forest
Author: just_ruth
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Pre-series, Japanese lore
Author's Notes: Aokigahara Forest at the foot of Mount Fuji is notorious as a site for suicides.
Summary: “So, Bobby, I’ve always wondered, how did you learn to speak Japanese?”
Word Count: 1711