Just havin' a beer!ruby_jellyFebruary 22 2011, 01:47:10 UTC
“More beer? Dean, I can’t keep up with you!”
“Hey little brother, you can but try. Watch this!” A teasing smirk, pursed lips, beer to the ready.
“Go on then,” Sam laugh faltered, expression slid to confusion, realisation, horror...”STOP!”
“WHAT?”
Sam held onto the wrist he’d grabbed, forcing the container away from Dean’s angry huffing.
“Look!”
“Son of a bitch!”
“Yeah, that’d do some damage.”
Dean pulled the tiny metal object as it swirled in the dregs of his beer. It was sharp and pointed, a hollow triangle, lethal.
They looked toward the barman, who winked, and disappeared.
“Who. What. Was that...?”
“The trickster? No. And look, no-one’s even noticed, as usual. What did you do Dean?”
Dean frowned, pulling out a cloth drawstring bag from his inside pocket. He loosened and shook it, tipping out three more hollow triangles.
“Might be time to be worried.” He glanced at Sam.
“You think?”
END.
So, any and all help, advise (even: go away, shee!) sought! First ever fic here, and only second attempt ever. *blush* *god, I feel naked - do all writers feel like this? Time to hide, methinks*
“Hey little brother, you can but try. Watch this!” A teasing smirk, pursed lips, beer to the ready.
“Go on then,” Sam laugh faltered, expression slid to confusion, realisation, horror...”STOP!”
“WHAT?”
Sam held onto the wrist he’d grabbed, forcing the container away from Dean’s angry huffing.
“Look!”
“Son of a bitch!”
“Yeah, that’d do some damage.”
Dean pulled the tiny metal object as it swirled in the dregs of his beer. It was sharp and pointed, a hollow triangle, lethal.
They looked toward the barman, who winked, and disappeared.
“Who. What. Was that...?”
“The trickster? No. And look, no-one’s even noticed, as usual. What did you do Dean?”
Dean frowned, pulling out a cloth drawstring bag from his inside pocket. He loosened and shook it, tipping out three more hollow triangles.
“Might be time to be worried.” He glanced at Sam.
“You think?”
END.
So, any and all help, advise (even: go away, shee!) sought!
First ever fic here, and only second attempt ever. *blush* *god, I feel naked - do all writers feel like this? Time to hide, methinks*
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Think I rate as a wanna be! :(
Must admit, most of the writing standard is quite high, and subsequently intimidating, see wimp as well. :(
Thank you for your kind words *hugs*
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