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filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sandymg August 8 2010, 02:23:14 UTC
Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did

I

Chef Boyardee made two kinds of ravioli: cheese and meat. Dad always bought the cheese. It was Dad’s favorite, it was Sammy’s favorite and Dean? Well, it was food and it was Sam’s favorite.

II

Dean really liked Katie Kornmeal. Not necessarily for the reasons Dean normally liked a girl. She didn’t have big breasts and she didn’t have full lips and she didn’t have long dark hair. She did have a little sister who she had to pick up from middle school right after classes ended and they’d end up dashing up the block together to make the other school in time and once their eyes met and rolled at just the same time and … Dean really liked Katie Kornmeal.

III

“Sam?”

“Dean? Why you … you been drinking?”

“Yeah. Some. Just … ‘S nothing. I … um … gonna go now.”

“Who you talking to?”

Dean looks up at his Dad. “No one.”

“Okay. Sit still while I take care of this.” His dad pulls the torn jagged edges of his flesh together and pulls the needle through. Dean flinches. “I’m sorry. Am I hurting you?”

Dean stares at the discarded phone on the motel bed. “No.”

IV

Lucifer rages, he roars, he spews venom and blood and filth.

He hates.

Sam watches dispassionately. They have forever. Even the devil’s temper tantrum has to end one day.

“It’s your brother. Nosy, useless, human that just couldn’t stop sticking himself where he didn’t belong. Should have killed him. Should have plastered his brains all over that damn car. Should have fed him his guts and shoved them down his gullet. Should have made him stare into your eyes as we ripped every limb from his body in slow agonizing pulls. Should have made him fucking leave!”

Sam usually doesn’t say much. But this time he quietly murmurs. “Nothing would have made him leave.”

Lucifer howls long and guttural into the endless gray mist until the sound reverberates the very gates of Hell and the winds of the Earth moan deep and dark that night.

fin

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did borgmama1of5 August 8 2010, 02:37:56 UTC
Guh! The last one--Oh yes! Hugs Sam!

And Katie--that is a neat one, I can totally see it.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did blacklid August 8 2010, 03:28:24 UTC
“I’m sorry. Am I hurting you?”

Dean stares at the discarded phone on the motel bed. “No.”

Oh. Ow. Owowowow. That could mean so many things... none good. *aches*

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sandymg August 8 2010, 03:31:25 UTC
I had something so clear in mind with that tiny snip. Not sure how it's being interpreted but I'm curious if you feel like sharing what you thought was going on and what Dean's 'no' meant.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did blacklid August 8 2010, 05:47:15 UTC
Well, the main one being that the person he'd been talking to on the phone hurt him worse than any number of gashes could do.

Then my mind got really dark and started imagining him what if it's not hunting and he's cutting, even though I hope he never really did anything like that.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sandymg August 8 2010, 05:52:50 UTC
Oh he was cut. But by more than a blade. I think it's all in the interpretation of dark. Thanks for sharing back with me.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did tahirire August 8 2010, 05:19:30 UTC
SO much yes. Thanks so much for filling this one!!!! :D :D

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sandymg August 8 2010, 05:44:04 UTC
You are welcome. That quote from Home is one of my favorite of the entire series. It kinda says everything you need to know about these boys in very few words.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did tahirire August 8 2010, 05:46:46 UTC
It totally does. :)

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sandymg August 8 2010, 17:26:16 UTC
Dean is special. No question about it. Glad you liked this.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did monicawoe August 8 2010, 14:53:00 UTC
Sam usually doesn’t say much. But this time he quietly murmurs. “Nothing would have made him leave.”

So, so true. And that's what makes Lucifer so mad.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sandymg August 8 2010, 17:25:15 UTC
Yep. He sure was mad enough at the end of 5.22. I could just imagine how more pissed he was after.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did wynefred August 9 2010, 04:25:27 UTC
“Nothing would have made him leave.”
Oh, yes! *sniff*
Lovely. All of it.

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sandymg August 9 2010, 04:31:52 UTC
Thanks so much!

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Re: filled -- Three Things Sam Winchester Never Knew About His Brother and One Thing He Did sweetdvl358 August 12 2010, 00:31:58 UTC
III was sad... I wanna hug Dean. :( All four were really good, though. Awesome job! :D

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