SPN: Duplicity, by Moonshayde

[moonshayde]

Title: Duplicity
Author: moonshaydeGenre/Rating : Gen, PG-13

Comments

[moonshayde]

I couldn't resist a Grelims reference :) Thanks for reading!

[coell]

Hee, good story!

[moonshayde]

Thanks!

[iamstealthyone]

Nicely done. I like that Dean knows something’s off with the Sam clones and is able to put it together eventually. And the clones are creepy in just the right way. Sort of Sam, but mostly not, and fairly intimidating.

Favorite lines:

He tried to focus and take aim. "Which -" He swallowed hard and steadied himself. "Where's Sam?"

I love this image of poor, addled Dean. *g*

tossed it on the table into a sloppy wet mess.

Good detail.

Instead, he got two rejects from the Village of the Damned.

*snickers*

"I'm the real deal. The one and only."

Five just gave him a patronizing pat on the shoulder. "Yes, you're very special."

*snickers*

"Well, then I guess we'll just have to kill a few of us."

Dean stared.

The room erupted into a ripple of laughter.

He had to go now.

I love how you wrote this section, with the quick sentence bursts to help underscore the creepy wrongness of things.

It was like watching that really cool junkyard scene from Superman III, only not quite as awesome.

*g* I love Dean making movie references.

[moonshayde]

Thank you very much. You always give such detailed feedback and it makes me glow inside. I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

[dotfic]

Heh, what a situation! That was funny, yet creepy (I like how Dean apparently nick-named the other Sams).

[moonshayde]

Thanks! I appreciate it!

[moonshayde]

Hee. Thanks!