Nights on the Ceiling, by fleshflutter

Aug 06, 2007 20:26

Nights on the Ceiling
(Sam/Dean, 2360, PG-13)
Psychic powers are not all they're cracked up to be.

It's not a dream he's had in a while. )

supernatural 101

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mickeym August 6 2007, 20:32:17 UTC
Poor Sam! And poor Dean, too--but I think Sam's right: he can do it to Dean because Dean wants him as much as Sam wants.

Poor broken, wounded, needy boys. *pets them*

This is fantastic--your writing just kills me every time, in all the best ways :)

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fleshflutter August 7 2007, 14:58:12 UTC
Oh I'm ever so happy it worked for you! Thank you ever so much for reading and for leaving such very kind feedback! And it must kind of suck for Sam, that Dean is just so receptive to something he can't control! *g*

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adibiase August 6 2007, 21:08:13 UTC
intense. worked itself well out towards the end - thanks!

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fleshflutter August 7 2007, 14:58:34 UTC
I'm very pleased you liked it! Thank you so so much for reading! :)

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gretazreta August 6 2007, 22:13:44 UTC
Oh, YEAH.

And Dean laughs at him. Laughs.

"That doesn't make you evil, Sammy. That makes you spoilt." = BRILLIANT.

I liked this a lot, I liked the resolution, and how it isn't REALLY a resolution, and the flirtation with darkness in this all the way. Nice, very nice.

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fleshflutter August 7 2007, 14:59:09 UTC
I'm so glad it worked for you, especially the slightly evil aspect. Thank you so so much for reading and commenting! :)

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dreamlittleyo August 7 2007, 00:50:02 UTC
So much love! And angst. Angst filled with love! This is fantastic. Especially this bit here, which was so very, very perfect:
Sam makes the door slam shut and goes on staring at the wall.
"I did that on purpose," he says. "You should learn to recognise the difference."
Perfect ending, too. God, just... yeah. I'm putting this in my memories now.

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fleshflutter August 7 2007, 15:00:00 UTC
Angst filled with love is just all you need to know about the boys! ;)
Thank you ever so much for reading, sweetie, I really appreciate it! ♥

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calijirl5150 August 7 2007, 04:59:38 UTC
Last line was the best :D

Love how its not Sammy's fault,its his brains LOL

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fleshflutter August 7 2007, 15:00:30 UTC
Sam's got to have something to blame it on. ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)

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