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Fanworks Discussion #1 (previously Fic Discussion #4)

Feb 17, 2012 05:18

[originally posted Feb 17 2012]
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mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 23 2012, 16:49:58 UTC

art by beautiful_crow

http://mpregbb.livejournal.com/17925.html

word count - 36,000

Jensen had always known he was different than his friends, some things - even those that are usually kept from innocent children - are just impossible to hide, and he had known what his nineteenth birthday would bring since the eve of his twelfth.

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 23 2012, 16:52:52 UTC

On the one hand YAY long Jeff/Jensen fic, on the other it's hemrage, and I remember not liking the long mpreg J2 fic she did. Hoping for a MALP nonnie on this one.

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 23 2012, 16:59:04 UTC

I took a peek at the end (and the hidden warnings) and it looks like it ends up in a quasi-threesome with Chris involved.

Um. So.

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 23 2012, 17:45:54 UTC

Chris? :/ I was so excited: Jeff/Jensen + long + mpreg Jensen, all I need from my id fic but unfortunately it had to include Chris, who's a massive boner killer to me ;_;

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 23 2012, 18:26:14 UTC

The warning & the threesome don't put me off, but hemrage's previous mpregs aren't always great with consent issues, so I'm a little wary.

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 23 2012, 19:46:58 UTC

Oh man. Hemrage's stuff is like crack to my id and for JDM/JA mpreg, I think I'll even be able to overlook the inevitable consent issues. JDM/JA, the things I do for you.

I just really wish she'd remove that awful Jensen manip from her site. D:

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 23 2012, 22:08:30 UTC

SA

Okay, so I've read it. And I really wanted to like it, but I'm left a bit wanting. I didn't feel any actual build up of a romantic relationship between Jensen and JDM or Jensen and Chris; it was all a matter of biology. Jensen needed to be fucked and JDM and/or Chris was the strong verile man around to do the fucking. And then voila, it's amore.

Which wasn't squicky or anything, but it definitely fell flat for me. Not even JDM's affection for Jensen or calling Jensen "sweetheart" (almost always guaranteed to make me melt) was enough to save the romance aspect of the fic for me. And honestly, Chris felt like an unnecessary addition. He didn't add anything; he literally just acted like a substitute cock while JDM wasn't around.

Jensen falling for Chris and JDM wasn't the only romance fail though. JDM fell for Jensen when he was 12, by seeing his picture on a site for bidders that Jensen was being auctioned off to. Which, for me, is a big time squick. And Chris apparently fell for Jensen or at least heavily started to ( ... )

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 24 2012, 04:06:34 UTC

This fic is fairly well written, and if it hits your kinks you'll probably love it, but it didn't really work for me ( ... )

Re: mpreg_bb: Perfecting The Man [Jeff/Jensen, NC17] by hemrage anonymous February 24 2012, 06:11:15 UTC

You've summed up what's endemic in hemrage's (ysbail's) fic. And that fucking godawful dean manip where it looks like he's having a BM = dnw!

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