New Words for Old Desires, for rillaotvalley (Dean/Jo, R)

Aug 10, 2007 16:12

Title: New Words for Old Desires
Author: mcee
Recipient: for rillaotvalley!
Rating: R for sex and language.
Pairing: Jo/Dean AU (with Sam, Ellen and John)
Summary: What if the Harvelle women were the ones hunting evil, saving lives, and the Winchesters owned a bar in Nebraska?
Author's note: Thanks to ink_stain for the awesome beta job and to sevenfists for the invaluable input.

The car sits in the dirt and Jo sits in the car, boots up on the dashboard despite Ellen's protests. )

rating: r, pairing: dean/jo

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vinylroad August 10 2007, 21:32:33 UTC
Oh man, just loved it. Loved it like MAD.

What a fantastic little universe. Such beautiful characterizations, great dialogue. Awesome.

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mcee August 25 2007, 04:11:15 UTC
Thank you so much, hon! This was hella fun to play with. :D

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ryuutchi August 10 2007, 21:37:21 UTC
Oh wow, that was awesome. I like how you reversed the positions without losing any of what makes the Winchesters the Winchesters and the Harvelles so awesome.

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mcee August 25 2007, 04:12:39 UTC
Thank you so much! It was fun to play with, and for some reason the essential things just fell into place nicely. Glad you liked!

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simplysonia August 10 2007, 22:10:16 UTC
Despite the fact I'm not a big fan of Jo's character, I am totally gushy over this story. You switched up the roles seamlessly.

I adored Sam (was kinda rooting for him and Jo to get together, interestingly enough, despite KNOWING the pairing :P), John even more though. Especially the big warm hug he gave Jo at the end.

And this Dean/Jo relationship seemed "right" to me with the surrounding circumstances. It was very rough, yet he leaves with her, which makes sense.

Really awesome work.

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mcee August 25 2007, 04:14:20 UTC
Once I was done writing this story, I actually had to go back and FIX it because it was too much like a Jo/Sam. Hee.

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback!

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kashmir1 August 11 2007, 02:50:58 UTC
This was just fantastic.

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mcee August 25 2007, 04:14:36 UTC
Thanks babe!

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rillaotvalley August 11 2007, 14:25:17 UTC
Just got in from a red-eye. Am exhausted and cross-eyed. But sooo excitd to read this...when I wake up from coma...

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