Those Hot Summer Nights, for snugduff (Dean/OFC, R)

Aug 25, 2008 08:00

Title: Those Hot Summer Nights
Author: stars91
Recipient: snugduff
Rating: R
Pairing: Dean/OFC
Summary: Pre-Series - Dean’s ‘something’ turns into a night he’ll never forget.
Author’s Notes: 1,643 words - Just playing in the sandbox, I don’t own any of it. Thanks goes to cornerofmadness for the beta!

Those Hot Summer Nights )

rating: r, pairing: dean/ofc

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snugduff August 26 2008, 01:45:05 UTC
That was beautiful. I absolutely loved it! ^^

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simplysonia September 1 2008, 22:32:41 UTC
I must admit, that ending snuck up on me. I was just settling in for the big show, and then it was over.

Elizabeth, whom he now referred to as just Liz because she liked it, was different.
I like that he has a nickname for her. It implies intimacy.

And I like the repeated use of "...something." Drives home that it's new and different for Dean.

I also adored the brief scene with Sam. I bet it was one of the last times Dean got to headlock Sam before Sam outgrew him, ha ha.

This flowed really well and was a pleasant read.

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