Everything That Rides Below the Surface, for themegalosaurus

Aug 25, 2020 08:09

Title: Everything That Rides Below the Surface
Recipient: themegalosaurus
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 4,341
Warnings: none
Summary: Sam and Dean are on a hunt in Missouri, and Sam's been having these strange dreams. There's no way he can tell Dean or Dad about them…until the creature they're hunting makes it impossible to hide any longer.

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monicawoe August 25 2020, 15:33:09 UTC
Oh I love this! What a great early hunt. Loved the case itself too- how cool! And early powers-Sam Always makes me super happy, yay! Really well done and a fun read.

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cassiopeia7 August 25 2020, 16:01:22 UTC
Love this! Young Winchesters, Powers!Sam doing the impossible to save Dean, and a ghost pterosaur! And the last line was killer. Now I’m wondering just how early Sam’s powers manifested ...

Fantastic job, mystery author!

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kalliel August 25 2020, 21:17:10 UTC
Oh, I adore this. <3333 I love the way Sam's burgeoning powers are woven into the story, and his insistence on PTEROSAUR over dinosaur, the way they disambiguate it from the Ozark Howlers (who just howl!!! omg <333) But what I love most is the loving detail to the action of this, from their initial attempt to extract the bones so as to start their fire elsewhere, and then...well, that plan going south. That attention to the mechanics of this ridiculous job they have is one of my favorite things, and it comes out so well in this fic. I loved reading this!!

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borgmama1of5 August 25 2020, 21:37:32 UTC
Nice description of the action in this--I could see it in my head.

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quickreaver August 28 2020, 08:51:38 UTC
What a tasty combo of case fic, cryptid, and complicated family dynamics, with a side of Sam powers! Great touch, that this was the impetus for his eventual chase towards college. Good stuff here!

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