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Three Thousand Six Hundred Degrees Fahrenheit, for pyrebi (gen, PG)

Jun 22, 2007 18:50

Title: Three Thousand Six Hundred Degrees Fahrenheit
Author: victoria p. [musesfool] / Sammy Hagar
Recipient: pyrebi
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: 3,910 words. Disclaimer: All recognizable characters belong to Kripke et al. Spoilers: Through AHBL2. Thanks to luzdeestrellas for the beta. All errors remaining are mine.
Summary: "As metaphors go, it's pretty on the nose, don't you ( Read more... )

2007:fiction

Comments 51

ignipes June 23 2007, 00:26:07 UTC

Oh, ouch. So beautifully achy and painful. I love anytime the boys have to go to the desert, and this is wonderful. I love how Dean's state of mind and ticking clock are slowly woven into the story, and I absolutely adore the open ending, with nothing fixed but the boys a step forward nonetheless. Lovely.

Dean nods, and wishes he believed in God, so he could pray for Esme Hernandez's soul.

And that? Completely heartbreaking.

musesfool July 12 2007, 14:12:38 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy it worked for you.

tabaqui June 23 2007, 00:37:15 UTC

Ack!
Boys!!
*pets Dean*

Sheesh. I love the heat being pretty much character number three. I hate summer and i hate heat and man, i could feel it.
:)

Good stuff!

musesfool July 12 2007, 14:13:00 UTC

Than you! I'm so glad it worked for you.

dolimir_k June 23 2007, 01:52:43 UTC

Man, poor Dean. He just can't catch a break.

musesfool July 12 2007, 14:13:40 UTC

*pets him*

I felt bad doing it, but it had to be done!

montisello June 23 2007, 02:25:26 UTC

So I'm reading this sitting in my house with the broken air conditioner, waiting for the landlord to come fix it. I think it made me even hotter.

Oh, and sorry, I yelled at the monitor when it ended. Damn you, Kripke!, or um, whoever!

musesfool July 12 2007, 14:14:15 UTC

Hee! I'm so glad the heat was palpable, though I'm sorry your A/C was broken. Thanks for reading and commenting.

caithream June 23 2007, 02:53:45 UTC

They're both awkward and stiff in the glassblower's shop, surrounded by tabletops covered in tiny glass animals and delicate vases, afraid to move and send it all tumbling,

My immediate thought here was, bulls in a china shop, though, really, that would probably be more Dean than Sam, hee.

Loved the imagery in all of this, of the desert and the town. I also like that Sam says "it's gonna look like we killed her..." Oh, boys.

musesfool July 12 2007, 14:14:46 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy it worked for you.