Smile Time 2: Smile Wider, for alethiometry

Aug 14, 2016 12:00

We've hit the halfway point, folks! And OMG, there have been so many awesome things to devour this summer, and trust me when I say there are so many treats yet to come. :D

Title: Smile Time 2: Smile Wider
Recipient: alethiometry
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~3,000 words
Warnings: canon-typical violence and gore
Author's Notes: a prompt involving a Japanese ( Read more... )

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alethiometry August 14 2016, 20:37:35 UTC
oooh, i love this so much! it reads and is paced just like another episode - in fact, the whole time i was reading it i could visualize every single scene. you also do a wonderful job alluding to those little tantalizing canon details that really make the fic come alive - dean's hell flashbacks, a mention of bela, bobby's japanese fluency - thank you so so so much for indulging my favorite urban legend and giving it your own spn twist!! <3

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borgmama1of5 August 14 2016, 22:31:34 UTC
Excellent tie into Dean's Hell flashbacks and nice use of Bobby and OC!

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tifaching August 15 2016, 00:04:08 UTC
I can never get enough of post hell trauma Dean. Thank you, thank you. :) Loved the bad girl in this, such an original monster! And Bobby taking the boys for sushi and Dean eyeing the sixty year old and being all bad ass and taking it out by himself. Loved it.

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celtic_forest August 15 2016, 02:57:44 UTC
Very creepy - excellent casefic!

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half_elven August 15 2016, 14:47:18 UTC
This fic definitely felt like an episode! Very urban legend-esque with the monster, and in typical fashion one of the boys endangers themselves on purpose! I also loved to see them on the West coast. I can imagine the long drive back!

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